Like it , great way to start it out cant wait to see more!
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That's gonna be sharp in color! Nice work Jug.
I love the tutorials you've posted so far... keep spreading the wealth of knowledge 
And now you can see some of the changes I did with the lines.
I got some good advice here on this piece (now THAT'S the type of art advice I like!).
Hey Juggy, looking good. Two things?
I'd actually make the dude that looks like he's choking even bigger, pull him all the way into the foreground to give the picture even more depth, a stronger composition, and I think, more of an emotional impact. Second, I think in your sketch stage, the silhouette was better inbetween the the wrapped figure's legs, so I'd lose the huge chunk of bandage/wrapping coming off and go back to the smaller one.
http://www.icefox-studios.net/for_juggy.jpg
Other than that Juggy, looks good. The choking dude in the front is my fave. Go figure :P
P.S. I just noticed the background guy with the dagger that's poking into the wrapped figure's thigh. I'd just turn the blade up so it doesn't hit him, since it's creating a tangent area right there.
I don't always post my 'Works in Progress' here, but I wanted to show everyone the stages I usually go through for a finished piece.
This is a piece for a Baron Midnight cover and you can see how I've laid out the rough sketch.
It's at this stage that I usually do any major changes. [u]Any and all feedback at this point is welcome[u], but keep in mind, I'll be listening to the client and their wishes.
-Juggy