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Hola mi amigos and amigas !
Below you will find a very rough sketch of Dragonberry Swimming underwater im working on .
I figured since everyone seems to be chomp chomp chomping at the bit to be amateur art critics id post it here for a red lining review
"Wait you mean I can't just drone on and on about whats wrong with the sketch ?"
well yes and no
I can't stop you from droning on and on but what your texting and im seeing are usually vastly different and I get bored after the first sentence anyways .
So grab a red pen or marker and go to town on the linked image
so I and the other forumites can see what the heck your blabbing on about .
If I get any bites i'll try to adapt the sketch to the general consensus
"Wait you won't automaticly change the sketch based on my awesome ideas ? "
nope but i'll at least consider it , well consider it if you post a redlined version, babbling on and on just means i'll bypass your ideas :P
Sketch for red lining
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lmao!!!
Scarfy girl you crack me up sweety!
is this where i tell you it is teh suxxorz and you tell me to go to h**l?
Oh and if i took a red marker to that it would look like Madden trying to point out whats going on in a football play! Wouldn't make any sense anyways!!
So i'll just say [censored] off and you [censored] rock!! 
:P While it may seem like bait to attract trolls , im honestly intrested in feed back on this piece .
Well feedback under my guidelines :P IE red lines to show weak spots that could be changed , adapted or improved upon .
I did one of these up the last time we had "the discussion "
no excuses go grab a red marker and harness the power of your inner art critic !!
<3
besides Niv would sooo banhammer me if this was a trick post solely to lure in the resident art critics so I could start fights 
Totally legit thread for red lining critiques
I was unaware Dragonberry had such feral looking claws.
I like the detail on those, to be honest.
What? Red lines? Do you REALIZE how lazy I am? My Wacom tablet is like an entire foot away... AND NOT EVEN PLUGGED IN!!
<shakes fist > i'll redline you !!
Now I have red lines all over my monitor. 
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Now I have red lines all over my monitor.
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lmao!!
I was thinking that too when she posted this....
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I'ma gonna get mah crayons out after work.
TL
Hey there Scarftastic. I'll redline this later today for ya. As always, I love your faces.
Thanks TL and Say, most appreciated .
I ate all my red crayons, but I left a couple comments DA-side. Pretend they're awesomely well done red lines. 
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I've been trying my hand at it but there is honestly not a lot to do. Especially since your lines are a lot more fluid than mine. I draw kind of scratchy with sharp edges. Oh well, maybe you will get what I'm trying to say when I'm done.
Redlining is much more helpful than just trying to explain. Lady Judgement kept trying to explain something to me and I wasn't getting it. When he "drew" over my piece, then I was able to comprehend it.
Yeah you'll actually see red lining in both classes and on art forums , its a quick way for someone to show you something which might be hard to convey with just words .
The tail looked a bit off center to me, like it was coming out of her left cheek. o.O
Otherwise, it looks salamander sexay! Link.
yeah, i like the butt cheek fix
Liberty
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You asked for it!
You already have heard about the butt cheek tail, so I'll forgo that, but I would like to mention that I was tempted to give Deebs bigger ta-tas, for the 18-24 male market, but then I would have had to sacrifice the water wings.
Water wings > big bewbages.
TL
Another vote for water wings and Qui-Gon
Butt cheek fix noted and will put that in , I was kinda dicey on how the tail was positioned this only confirms it
ahahahahahaha TL belive it or not im going to add a fish based on your redline ...just not a smirnoff fish :P as this will help show scale and show that she is underwater even without color .
I may have to pass on the TL bum tattoe <3
I was originally going to give her a few more watery themed adaptions but wasn't sure if that would make her too unrecognizeable
Here is my contribution. The ear mark was my mistake. Nothing wrong there but I felt her nose was off center and her right hand should be visible. Oh, and bubbles.
<smacks head > totally forgot bubbles , your right that is a definite add in and I think your right on the back hand too .
it really is alot easier trying to see what folks are jabbering on about with a red line
whats everyones take on the nose , I think I actually prefer BW's positioning
Hola mi amigos and amigas !
Below you will find a very rough sketch of Dragonberry Swimming underwater im working on .
I figured since everyone seems to be chomp chomp chomping at the bit to be amateur art critics id post it here for a red lining review
"Wait you mean I can't just drone on and on about whats wrong with the sketch ?"
well yes and no
I can't stop you from droning on and on but what your texting and im seeing are usually vastly different and I get bored after the first sentence anyways .
So grab a red pen or marker and go to town on the linked image
so I and the other forumites can see what the heck your blabbing on about .
If I get any bites i'll try to adapt the sketch to the general consensus
"Wait you won't automaticly change the sketch based on my awesome ideas ? "
nope but i'll at least consider it , well consider it if you post a redlined version, babbling on and on just means i'll bypass your ideas :P
Sketch for red lining