WIP critiques please
I like it a lot...especially the feet (that's something that always gives me trouble...hence white ankle socks =P) A mirrored reflection of her face? I think it's a brilliant idea
Advice on her back? Maybe a slight darkening to indicate her spine. I really like the way it's turning out though, and can't wait to see it finished
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Photography
Looking good so far.
Just remember that she has to be on a white background for the finished piece, I think Jugy is going to combine all the pieces
Crestent lvl 50 Mind/Emp Controller http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p...cGallary-1.jpg
http://crestent.deviantart.com/
http://www.creyindustries.com/viewhero.php?id=21809
Thanks guys for the feedback. I think you're right Darque.
Yeah, I just like drawing on a black background it helps me see the colors better, I'll make sure to change it before I submit the finished piece.
theres something...er... flat, about her butt. maybe im just nitpicking, but it seems like the shading is like... exactly opposite from what it should be, right along the top center of her butt.
other than that, and the fine tuning along the edge of the image.... It looks pretty awsome so far.
Hey LR:
I did a little photoshopping... haven't had to do this since I use to Mod a Drawing forum. But for you anything, so here goes...
Altered Version
Here's what I did: (and these are the only things I touched)
1) lowered the shoulder, I know hers are angling down in the original, but it made her a little hunch-backish...
2) defined the bicep, by indenting here, i read somewhere that makes them look more "heroic"
3) same principle, you have to indent the bicep, but extend the forearm and shoulder (deltoid)... just makes the arm in general look like it's tensing.
4) raised the negative space here to clearly define the top of her hips, the indent at the thigh, and slope upward of her stomach.
5) she's got such a great "line" here, that i thought the other arm took away from it, which is why i raised the back arm. i also gave her trunk a little more junk, and defined the cleft a little, it doesn't have to be as dark as i made it, but i didn't like the single line.
6) i tried the arm bent at the waist, but again it took away from her, also i didn't shade it cause that arm could be in complete shadow almost as if she was leaning on a wall, or you could change the hand to hold a weapon... um or my favorite, the bleeding severed head. j/k
7) the arm i think also works, because her head is looking in the same direction, i curved the far edge of her hair, so the your eye would travel back to that sexy spinal column, and then down again to that "blue moon"...
YOU DON'T REALLY NEED ANY OF MY CHANGES...
But for another direction, just something to think about in the future, hope it helps.
LJ
Thanks very much LJ. I agree with you. I had planned on working more on her back and tushie I think it looks a lot better with a little more "junk" in it. Also thanks for hte tips with the arms. The numbers by the picture really helped. *huggles*
Ok fiddled with the image a bit and changed some things. What do you think? Update
Left you more notes, but I forgot to say the pinky edge should be straight, not curled like you have the hand now. Straight like it's against the side of her leg.
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Here is my WIP for Juggertha's art Jam. I would appreciate any advice you guys could give me. Thanks