Spirit Samuri and Star Watcher (inked only - WIP)

Spirit who? Yeah, I know...not regulars by any stretch but I recently got CoH for my daughter's birthday and we've been teaming up as a duo.

Here's a quick WIP of the inks. Spirit Samuri and Starwatcher (Ink)

I find myself stumbling over inking Spirit (who as the name suggests, is a ghost). It appears the trick is...how to ink someone to look transparent? I'm hoping the colors with pull it out.

Thoughts/Comments welcome.

Thanks,
8

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"Scumball in the side pocket." - 8 Baller

Something looks funky about Starwatcher's left foot. I'm not sure how to describe it though. That's the only thing that stood out to me. I like it!

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your = Belonging to you.
you're = Contraction meaning "You are."
Ur = The name of an ancient Mesopotamian city.
ur = This is not a word.

Thanks I'll take a closer look. That would be HER left foot right...not the foot on the left

8

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"Scumball in the side pocket." - 8 Baller

It looks great, but I concure with the foot statement. The foot in the front of the drawing looks to big and a little "wunky" for lack of a better word.

Other than that is looks really cool

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I think you've got the right idea with the thinner ink lines. It gives him a lot less substance than she has. I can't wait tos ee it finished!

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Thanks all, I'll fix the heel before I go to color.

*Note to self: Must do more research on women's footwear. *

Thanks,
8

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"Scumball in the side pocket." - 8 Baller