Ink Dragon (Issue 1: Ink Eraser)


Eiichiro

 

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That's pretty impressive


 

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BWAHAHA!!!

That's good!!!



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Anti-Karma.

Very nice!


 

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That's hilarious Great job!


 

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Hehe, thanks for the comments. It's missing a little in the middle which I wanted to add, because I thought the cover counted towards the 8 page limit. But turns out it doesn't so I'm free to add another page!

Also, I think the cover could use a little work, it's a bit bland as it is.


 

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That's quite fun!

I don't know if it's because of the limitations on the program, but sometimes it's hard to follow which word balloons you need to read in what order. Crossing panels with them is not a good idea, try to keep them as together as possible for that reason.

Also, the blue color on the cover for the font is very, very hard to read. Maybe put a drop shadow if you can, in a brighter color to offset the fact that it all but bleeds into the black.

Good work otherwise, very nicely done screenies and story!


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