The Ivory Figurine: Awakening (Origin Story)


Frosty_Femme

 

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Looking good! "Diplomacy". Best line ever

Sadly my brain is too damn exhausted to offer anything constructive at the moment. Still, it's a fun little read


"Take the Yuan-Ti, bash them with a club made of frozen stupidity, then rip out their sense of subtlety with a rusty spoon, and then you have the Snakes of Mercy Isle" -Taltha Widowfang, drow stalker
Now playing at an MA near you: Dragonslayers #335375

 

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I think you did a marvelous job on it.
What program did you use for the comic book panels?


 

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You don't need Photoshop to tell a good story. I think your comic is just fine the way it is.


your = Belonging to you.
you're = Contraction meaning "You are."
Ur = The name of an ancient Mesopotamian city.
ur = This is not a word.

 

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Thanks Its made in the comic creator program (the one for the contest, its a free trial download).


Mew

 

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Great story and fantastic use of screenshots!


 

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Ok.... attempted it again...replaced some things and added better text. Also tried a new filter (woo for free trials!) for the entire thing.

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Anyone have some suggestions? Do you like the filter more then before?


Mew