Help me with this character


Prodiguy

 

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Snomobile is a Mutant Ice/Super Strength Tanker on Infinity. This is his old backstory:

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Up north, where the land is frozen all the time, there was once a boy born unlike the others. I had an uncanny affinity for the cold, and the snow, and the ice. It didn't sap my strength like it did the others; it made me even stronger.
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After a few hundred years of using my abilities just to help the tribe, and to make my own life easier, we were 'discovered' by the white people. They came from the warm lands, and showed us a different world. They also exterminated the tribe, in one way and another.
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With most of my people gone, and our way of life with them, I wandered south to see what the explorers had described, and perhaps to avenge my kin. But the warm people, mostly, are not bad. So I use my powers to stop the ones who are.

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But I'm not satisfied with it. How can I change it for the better? I don't even think I want to be an eskimo any longer.


 

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Hm...

...Where is GreyScribe's thread? Seriously, if you want advice, or even a new bio, he is awesome.

...He should charge... Heck, if he doesn't, I will... Create a forum to store him in, and then charge for entry.

Whaddya MEAN he isn't a computer program?

Lies and deciet.