Great story there, I love a good melodramatic hook!
I suggest you pop that link into your signature cause it's great. I LOVE it when people get really into the story of their character like that, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
@Jeffery Duke
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I love that costume...
One of the greatest I've seen in quite some time.
Good form.
You may want to look over the bio once more. There were some grammatical errors, but all and all it's a solid bio.
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Done and done! Sadly there wasn't enough space for Power's info but his time has come and gone anyway I think. 
I will indeed look over the text again ER. Hopefully I'll spot the errors you saw.
How about linking to a list of all your heroes on Crey Industries. I believe there is a specific link you can access that allows other people to see it.
@Jeffery Duke
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Wow Powerforge, yourcostumes are awesome.
-RF
Truly an exceptional hero! As an amateur (hack) writer, I love a good story and indeed that are some really cool pics and costume scheme. For some reason the PS2 version of Shinobi comes to mind even though it quite obvious that this is your own creation.
My only question to you is this: How do you do that thing with Crey Industries???? :P
Nice bio, and that is one awsome costume you got there.
Crestent lvl 50 Mind/Emp Controller http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p...cGallary-1.jpg
http://crestent.deviantart.com/
http://www.creyindustries.com/viewhero.php?id=21809
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Truly an exceptional hero! As an amateur (hack) writer, I love a good story and indeed that are some really cool pics and costume scheme. For some reason the PS2 version of Shinobi comes to mind even though it quite obvious that this is your own creation.
My only question to you is this: How do you do that thing with Crey Industries???? :P
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Consider your question answered =D
"Take the Yuan-Ti, bash them with a club made of frozen stupidity, then rip out their sense of subtlety with a rusty spoon, and then you have the Snakes of Mercy Isle" -Taltha Widowfang, drow stalker
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Hey guys and gals!
I am really fond of concept for my characters. Recently we have had a few people showcasing their character's origin story and I wanted to jump on that bandwagon right quick.
Here's Battleforge's history. I tried to keep it short so you wouldn't be hit with a wall of text but I tend to get carried away with this type of thing. Hope you like it.
The Battleforge!
All comments and criticisms welcome. Thanks for looking.