StaticThunder WIP


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This is a preliminary sketch of a picture I am doing for StaticThunder.

StaticThunder face Pencils

Comments and critiques are welcome and wanted

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I like the realism it has to it.


 

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I like his expression. Nice work.


 

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Looks so real. Great start. Thanks Grey


 

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A small update

I ran around to get references shots of zeus.

There still some things to had so dont worry about the large empty areas.

Not much of an update but I figured you would like to know what was happening

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heh....zues battle mech. nice...although personally prefer the shadowhawk and phoenixhawk. heavy wize, barghest all the way....~


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Nice touch. Static puts a hurting on those Zeus!


 

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This is a preliminary sketch of a picture I am doing for StaticThunder.

StaticThunder face Pencils

Comments and critiques are welcome and wanted

Thanks

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Really love the piece. Its very realistic as mentionned by others too. If I can allow myself one comment (not that I can suggest how to fix it) is that the nose does see like a profile view whereas the rest of the face is slightly turned towards us. Now I know that with the angle you picked that is basically what it will look like but I was wondering if there would be a trick or something that could be done to give us the impression that the nose is sticking out more towards us than having us see it sideways.

As I said ... just a comment and I don't know the answer. Even as it is this is a very good piece. Don't get me wrong. I was just commenting since you said you would appreciated it.


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I see what you mean. And yes you are right. Not sure how to fix it either but it means I will be looking at pictures of faces trying to find that angle and "see" what I did wrong.

If anyone has input on that I would appreciate a lot.

And thanks thornster


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I see the problem and all I can think of is to take the line between the edge of the nose and the eye and change the angle of it. I believe the parallel lines give the profile effect whereas a variant angle to both lines and maybe a dent near the curve of the edge of the nose should provide a look of being turn toward the viewer by a few degrees angle.

But...... this advice is coming from someone who took drafting in school and ruined his art career.


 

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Thanks for the comments

I tried and worked a bit on the noze

I hope I did not mess it up too much

Static face pencils try number 2


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OK Static has been very patient and I have been procrastinating enough. After putting this aside for quite a while I am back working on it ..

Still very far from finished but at least it is not at a standstill anymore

STATIC WIP 3


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Another WIP just to show that I am still working on this.

Static WIP colors


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Looks good, where is the old man anywayz?


 

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From what I gather His CoH account is not active at the moment. Still I want to finish what I start and I know he watches on DA since he posted there the last time I put up a WIP


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