Wicked Angel WIP - Suggestions Please! ^_^

Yesterday, we just watched movies all day in school, so I brought my sketch book and started Wicked Angel.

This is what I have so far. Excuse the hair, I'm going to go back and make that a lot better.

So, what do you guys think? Critiques are loved.

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Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!

You might want to bring her waist in a little and widen her hips You've got a pretty manly body shape there with the wide shoulders and tapered hips, giving her a more pinched in the middle shape will feminize her a lot. Also the head is reeeeally oval, might want to take a bit off the top there

It's coming along really well though BAS!! Can't wait to see the finished product!

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Thanks Star! I'm on it!

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Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!

Nice going ..

Another thing you may want to look at is the wings .


Wings have bones at the leading edge and so that part is mostly made of straight sections it is actually the back edge that is round

The wings ar also great at giving a feel for movement.

Look here I doodled something to try ans explain what I mean.


I hope it helps

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...depends on the over all look your trying for BAS. for the most part though I would go with the suggestions made by the sugar queen...I mean Starchasm. ~

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Yay!!! Tyvm, Grey! Ok, I'm on it...I'll post my progress when I get home (I'm on my mom's office computer in the city)

Thanks again!!!

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Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!

Nice job, BAS.


Also.... This should help ya with yer wings.

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Ooo, ahhh, pretty anime girls...O.O


Erm...Thanks Derek!

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Ooo, ahhh, pretty anime girls...O.O


Erm...Thanks Derek!

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Heh... Not all the examples are female.

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Looks good so far. I can't wait to see the next step.

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I looked at W. Angels picture and Now I see why you drew the wings the way you did! Strange angle does give it a similar shape to what you did.

Live and learn

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Uggh, I just changed them...

Ah, well. It's pretty much done, I just need to scan it and such.

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Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!

I guess I should take some more pictures of her. I guess I was trying to get a good shot of her costume for most of those pics but didn't pay attention to how the wings looked. I'm sorry.

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Oh, np. I tried to mimic the pose, but it came out to you just hovering instead, so the wings look nice. I'm sorry I couldn't get it tonight: The scanner is in my bro's room and I was feeling kinda' sick, so I'll have to do it tomorrow.

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Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!

take your time. it's cool. I'm just glad you're drawing my character at all.

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