Looks nice, and congrats on hitting 50!
For your next one (hope there will be others!) I'd suggest some less abrupt transitions in the longer scenes at the start if you can work that.
The quick cuts near the end were cool!
The quicker parts in the music can handle the quicker cuts, whereas the others seem to lend themselves better to more gradual transitions.
Good job. 
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Nice montage. Good scene selection.
I don't know enough about videography to give solid critique, but I loved some of the scenes you used.
oh... and gratz on hitting 50
I like, the music works with the visual and keeps me interested. But where's the obligatory hitting-level-50 screenshot!? You did take one, right??
I thought I'd post it up over here so people outside of the Triumph forum might catch a look. Anyway, nothing too special here, just a little music video montage I put together to celebrate my first character reaching 50. Enjoy
http://youtube.com/watch?v=xLekrwSanoo