Zikar Comics!


Deebs

 

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Yup, I went ahead and did it Oo
A (non CoH) comic of my character... uh... Zikar.
Or rather, the first page.

New page every Wednesday if I get enough comments.

Cover
Page 1

Constructive critism very very welcome!


 

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looks intresting Z haven't seen enough to really comment yet tho


 

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*laughs at Zikar*

Erm.. uhm.. I mean... Good work!


 

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Um.. I don't think this comic will sell very well.


First of all, there is not a single monkey on the cover.

Secondly, every comic needs a cameo from spiderman or wolverine. I think that's written in the comic code or something.

Anyway, add those two things and it may just sell a million copies!

Zeus - god of truthful critiquing


 

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Um.. I don't think this comic will sell very well.


First of all, there is not a single monkey on the cover.

Secondly, every comic needs a cameo from spiderman or wolverine. I think that's written in the comic code or something.

Anyway, add those two things and it may just sell a million copies!

Zeus - god of truthful critiquing

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There may not be a monkey on the cover, but how do you know the lady isnt pointing at a a monkey, possobly of the giant flying variety?

Cant wait to see the next page Z