Pizzahut4Life first Image Post


DasScoot

 

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Hey there. This is my first post of my drawings on the web. I have uploaded an image here.
My sketch before color.

I plan to color him tonight and see what I can get out of him. He had to share the pad with a friend of his. That is whats wrong with his right arm.

Thanks and criticism very much welcomed.


 

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The face looks really good!! You might want to move his right side in a bit and give it a more defined shape though. As it is he looks a little...portly

Welcome to the art forums!!!


 

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I really like the face, man, it's sweet lookin'... I always have so much trouble with faces.

I think star is right that his right side (as the viewer sees it, left side as the character stands) should be brough in a little bit, but other that that, it's lookin' really great.


 

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agreed on what has been said before. otherwise looking good thus far. be sure to post the finished product ~


...the sword is truth...

~whiteperegrine~

 

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I don't know much about art, but man, you need a new forum nick.


 

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Good start.

Eyes are a little high. The center of the eyes should be the halfway point of the whole head, and the eyebrows should be at the tops of the ears.


 

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Well that seems like an unfinished piece but what a great place to start from!

Please keep it up and continue posting your art!!