Quick (pencils) portrait of Silver Arrow

My next area I am working on improving is faces So I drew this portrait of my Arrow / device blaster : Silver Arrow

I would like your comments in general . But also more specifically what bothers me is the mouth . I do not seem to get that right. I do not know what I am doing wrong but it looks bad to me. Any advice ?

Sorry but I did this at work (it was a slow day) and the scanner is not so good.

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It looks good...

As for the mouth, it looks crooked. If you were trying to giver her a smirk, I think the right side of her mouth should look mostly normal, with the left side in more of a smile.

Sorry, I'm not exactly the best person to get art advice from... in fact, I'm pretty low on the whole totem pole of art..

I still think the pic looks great, though.

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Yes, tis crooked a bit. And maybe perhaps a little too high? Not sure. That's what i tlooks like to me but i can't see your circle sketch that lays out the proportions.

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Right Eye is off. Move it left more to center it or elongate the teardrop(lefthand side) to fix that.

For her to smirk use your face as refference. I keep a small pocket Mirror around personally.

Notice the lines that form between your cheeks/nose? Add that and the "Cleft" in between the bottom of her nostrils and the top of the "V" in her lips.

I'm also thinkin you should raise her eyebrow more ala "The Rock". It'll give a nice juxtaposition to her left side.

OOh.. and For faces the Mirror helps immensely. If somethins' off and you can't see it right away, look at its reflection in the mirror that'll usually cue you into the problem areas. It sounds funny but it works.

Me 2 bits,
-CJ

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Thanks that is good advice . I will rework it as soon as I have time.

Unfortunatly the mirror might not be as useful as it could since I have a beard but Istill can use it to see expressions and will pay attention to those things when looking ay other poeples.

Thanks again

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Nice Grey!!

Was this just a sketch bro?


Or ya gonna ink and color it in?

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Just a sktech


doing a lot of faces right now ...because something is bothering me on most of them and I am trying to correct it. I need to be better at faces for the next 2 project I will do. They will be group shot and not everyone wears a scarf over there faces.

Practice... Practice ...Practice.

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