Sorta cool.. but how are you gonna continue it? Eh its like a newspaper article.. Hehe ^_^.
Hmmm, well if your trying to make a newspaper article maybe put some more suspense into it :O! Like today newspaper:
Todays headline: MAN SMASHED WITH SLEDGHAMMER, ATTACKER NOT FOUND
A big YAR for pirates!
Jury selection began today in the trial of Tyrone X as more alleged victims crawl out from every corner of society. Rumors of abuse and corruption seem to follow Tyrone everywhere he goes today. Hero Corps has placed him on indefinate suspension and his closest collegues and contacts, like Haley Phillips of Skyway City, feel Tyrone may be "a loose cannon".
New allegations from the strange counter culture known as the "Lost" claim Tyrone used illegal search without a warrant when he raided thier warehouse one week ago.
When asked about these new allegations, Tyrone's lawyers declined to comment.
Tyrone is now sidelined by Hero Corps policies and a new masked hero has burst on the scene: Rasta Mon. Witnesses say Rasta Mon has busted a series of criminals in wake of Tyrone's absense.
When asked what Tyrone thought of Rasta Mon filling the void created by his suspension, Tyrone replied "You think Tyrone being sidelined is gonna make him loose a step? (N-word) please! Tyrone will be back and badder than before and they won't be rememberin' no Rasta Mon."
Rasta Mon's sudden burst of celebrity on the hero scene has left many wondering why they hadn't heard of him sooner. He is the same height, weight, and has the same powers of Tyrone leading many conspiracy theorists to believe that Rasta Mon and Tyrone are one in the same. If this were to be proven true, it could mean terrible things for the Tyrone X camp with their pending trial.
Tyrone X is currently under investigation by the Hero Corps internal affairs division for use of excessive force in the apprehension of criminals. A grand jury has found that there is enough evidence to bring this case to trial. The Paragon Gazette has obtained these exclusive photos to be used as evidence against Tyrone:
Exhibit A
As you can see from this photo, Tyrone's use of this Hellion's own sledgehammer has effectively turned this man into a eunuch.
Exhibit B
A far too common scene in Tyrone's criminal busts. Many victims have been hung and left for display. This is cruel and unusual.
Exhibit C
This Abomination will never walk again.
Despite the viciousness of these attacks, Tyrone has many supporters. Laquanda Jones of Kings Row says "Thems (Hero Corps) are a bunch a racists. They just tryin' to keep a good brotha down. We be needin' a brotha like him to keep the 'dine of the streets and keep our kids safe."
Brutal Vigilante or Righteous Hero? Will Tyrone be found innocent or guilty? Can Paragon City survive another Hero incarceration? Haunting questions on the virge of a potential Rogue Island invasion. And what might happen should Hero rights be infringed upon and greater caution be used in not harming the villains they are apprehending? Will the powers that be pass and enact the nerf law codenamed "Issue 7" in the wake of this political nightmare?