A Great ending for what has to be one of the best Origin stories I've read on this board. You have inspired be to work harder on finishing my story 
yes great story mate.....long wait but well worth it. I got a little tear to the eye, aye.
Dammit Fox, I am in tears.
No, Deth is not Aura. However, she does have issues. Why does Fox always choose women with issues?
Do they come in any other variety? 
Took the words right out of my mouth, Boss...
I put you in tears, Deth? Wow...
Thanks everyone for the feedback... it's always hard "ending" a story... which is why I think I put it off for so long, but even I, the pinnacle of self criticism, felt it ended... right...
Umm...Whale reeded it but hims a lil cobfoosled by a few of dem big wurds. Whale gunna try an reeds it agin an haf da Cog lady tells him wut dem big wurds meens.
So I've decided two things.
1) I need to move to Virtue.
2) When I get done with my summer classes (damn that college), I'm writing my own origin story.
Otherwise, excellent job sly. I loved reading it. MUST.... HAVE... MORE!!!!!!!
That is truly the BEST compliment I can receive... someone is inspired to write their OWN origin.
Good Luck! Thank you, and remember, write from the heart, and you can't go wrong. 
~TSF~
About time for the sixth part! ^^
Truly a powerful and emotional ending. It was well worth the wait!
I know that the community-project only wanted fics around 1500 words or so, but I still think you should try to send this in. Perhaps they'll have some sense of quality anyways.. ^^
You be sure to check out my Voidchildstory(Which is completed now. =P) as well and let me have the judgement from someone with such fanfic-expertise as well.. ^^
Fox, this is ridiculously good stuff. I was impressed with you before I read this thread- I only wish I'd read it earlier. Bravo!
Awesome story. Truly awesome. That's all there is to it. This is going to sound like flattery (which it is, I guess... O.o), but you don't write professionally, do you? You should...
Loved the story. Even sent the link to my non-CoH friends. :P
<grins>
I love all this feedback, thank you!
No, I don't write professionally... but this sure felt good and I'm thinking about it!
Again, thank you.
If only writing professionally could make you a nice living...
I mean it can, but its not easy...
HENCE me not doing it, and nervous to try!
Bravo, Fox! Excellent ending, and well worth the wait. Thanks for sharing your story with all of us.
nice story. my favorite by far.
((Well done, Sly. Much respect. 
))
Heh, thanks Balt! See you around and your "mysterious sect."
Of course you will see us around. BTW, you have mail. hehehe
I'm thinking of writing an epilogue... but I'm stuck... there may be a post here soon though... some day.
<reminds herself that no matter how exciting this is,
holding her breath is probably not a good idea>
Looking forward to it.
What is it with you and characters named "Rose," Fox? ::grins::
Excellent story Sly. A very original piece, am i right in thinking that you are Yankee Daring from the old boards?
MLK Jr
I believe that unarmed truth and unconditional love will have the final word in reality. This is why right, temporarily defeated, is stronger than evil triumphant.
I thought the same thing, too, because of another post Fox made a long while back. But nope, they just played in the sandbox as kids.
Ohh please! We all know that Deth is Aura in disguise
Very nice ending, now if I just got my behind together and got on with the next chapter of mine...