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Okay...seems the posts come with caveats LOL Here's this one: There's some hefty bad words in this one, but IMHO, they're appropriate for the character. If you want the "director's cut", send me PM, but I don't think the censored boxes do it much harm. And thank yew again for your support...

Part 3 is up. Two things to note:

1) Major T may not remember it, but his eloquent "WTF ?" after I posted this part in the original thread resulted in the rewrite you'll be reading. Thanks T !

2) Formatting is still teh suk !

The second part is up Formatting is my enemy !

Okay...re-started Demon's story as "Tales of the Hunter Institute". The paragraphs are blocky, I was in a rush this morning ! Howevah, it's up again ! LOL

Got a couple of parts to rewrite, then they'll be up in short order.

Part One of Tales of the Hunter Institute (The Demon Hunter stories) has been hammered upon, and posted on my DA site. Same link

First and foremost...[u]THIS IS NOT DEMON HUNTER STUFF[u] ! Gonna clean all that up, hammer out some dents, and repost it all soon. I promise. Really. Trust me.

As for what this is... in short, a Origin story for a Stalker I have (on Pinnacle) Her story comes with a disclaimer:

This story has several potentially offensive scenes involving clergy, including a r a p e and a murder. I am in no way "against" any particular denomination, sect, etc. of what is often labeled "organized religion." This is not "anti" anything, not an "attack" on anything. If the images or the characterizations involved will offend you, please don't read the story.

Here's the Link !

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::innocent grin::

The fun has just begun...

Okay, why the heck did I mess with Part 3 of Demon's thread ? In short, because what was in my head for Part 3 didn't make it to the page, and what was in my head for 3 was built on in 4, and explained backwards what happened (a bit) in one and two. Confused ? Me too LOL

I described it to someone in game last night (I think Silverclaw) Part 3 was the "informational" installment, and the "emotional" ones built upon it. If 3 was weak, then the others suffered a bit, imho. Even worse, if 3 is weak, the rest of the story suffers, because in 3, we find out (not really, just enough to aggravate Major T ! ) why Demon has the powers he has.
Beyond that, I ain't saying nothing I can honestly say that what you'll read now is what I saw through Demon's eyes when he went to China, what he felt.

Shutting up now

Edited: There is no part 5...yet LOL

Meh...looks like y'all get a backwards new post then LOL

How do you go back and edit/repost something that's already up ?

LOL Thanks ! The only reason I bothered to add the "guide" was the connection to what the crazy guy heard, then said to Hunter. Lose that, and it loses a little creepiness. [censored] EM !

KK...Part 4 is up. Howevah, looks like I'll be moving the whole shebang to Deviant Art soon ::grumbling:: You'll understand why when you read this one...

Here's a Handy Guide to [Censored] Bits, by paragraph; the Directors Cut, as it were:

2- Female dogs
3, 8 (x2)- Stupid Donkey
4- Bosoms
10 (x2) - Fornicating

Now, do I blame the boards for having to censor it ? Of course not. But it wasn't until this one I realized how necessary censoring can gimp a story (post). So, I'll be hauling the whole mess to DA, and will post here again with a link when that's done.

To quote Bartles and James... "Thank yew again for yur support.

::smack a piece of paper on the wall with duct tape, giggles incoherently:: PART 3 ! HOLY CRAP, IT'S PART 3 ! :***** out::

I posted another installment for Demon, under the same thread.

I don't know if this has been answered (too lazy too look all through the thread) but "Illinois Nazis" was used in the film The Blues Brothers (a group of Nazis were chasing them) The 5th Collumn are Naziesque, hence the comparison