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  1. CLAN DESTINY
    Arc ID: 349053
    Level: 30+
    Length: Long
    Keywords: [open to suggestions here]
    Enemies: Rikti, Freakshow, Devoured Earth, Longbow, Custom
    Description: Heroes are always supposed to do the right thing, but what happens when "the right thing" is a choice between two evils? When the line between what is the greater good and the necessary evil become blurred, morality is put to the ultimate test. What will you decide?

    So this will be my entry but first I really need feedback - particularly about game mechanics. As a n00b, there are a lot of technical things I tend to overlook which don't rear their ugly head through my limited solo testing. Specifically, I think I didn't make this solo friendly enough. I may need to nerf my customs as well - particularly the end boss. I've got an extensive custom group (3 min, 4 lts, 2 boss, 1 elite) and I'm hoping they all show up when the size and level of groups vary.

    Again, any feedback (story, mechanics, costumes, powers, etc) is welcome - even it it's scathing and/or unflattering
  2. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Eva Destruction View Post
    99% of science fiction and fantasy out there sucks.
    Full agreement there.


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    Originally Posted by Eva Destruction View Post
    There are far more time travel stories that are bad.
    This is true of pretty much ALL fiction. To single out time travel as a particularly egregious offender is an affront to the awfulness of most romance, fantasy, heist, spy and teen vampire stories ever written. Just because a lot of fiction sucks, doesn't mean we should just hold a moratorium on entire genres and stop trying.

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    Originally Posted by Eva Destruction View Post
    Once you introduce time travel, it becomes a cop-out for writers who can't come up with a better idea. The very concept encourages inconsistency, and makes for an easy "you can do anything you want because at the end of the episode everything will go back to normal." It's cheap, and it's meaningless.
    Again, just because many writers use time travel in that way doesn't mean that using in a more intelligent and/or entertaining way is impossible. I've seen numerous examples from literature and film. It's only "cheap and meaningless" if writers use it that way.

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    Originally Posted by Eva Destruction View Post
    It is especially cheap in the context of an MMO, where status quo is god, to throw in some time travel rather than to write a good story set in the here and now of the game world with a definite conclusion that doesn't disrupt said status quo.
    Time travel stories do not have to disrupt the status quo. In fact, a good time travel story can add many layers of depth to the established canon by going to the past and filling in a few gaps. Going forward in time can be a good way to examine alternate or divergent futures - and because the future isn't set in stone it by definition doesn't disrupt the status quo.


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    Originally Posted by Eva Destruction View Post
    If you want to aspire to mediocrity, that's your prerogative. Just because you're not as good a writer as some professionals, doesn't mean you shouldn't try to be.
    That was precisely my point. Venture had seemed to imply that because Harlan Ellison was the only writer he thought did a time travel story that was half decent, then anyone who wasn't as good shouldn't bother. We're all trying to be better writers through this exercise. I just think that saying "time travel stories are all crap written by lazy authors and no one can write a good one so do something else" is completely against that ideal.
  3. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Venture View Post
    I have been reading science-fiction and fantasy almost as long as I've been alive (I'm 46) and I have never seen a time travel story that was not either a) hackneyed, b) riddled with logical flaws, c) an excessive exercise in Gumping or other forms of historical abuse, or more commonly d) all of the above.

    "The City on the Edge of Forever" almost makes it. This means unless you can outdo Harlan Ellison and/or D. C. Fontana (who was largely responsible for the episode people actually saw), we don't need you.
    I would argue that 99% of all science fiction and fantasy that's out there is - to some extant - hackneyed or riddled with logical flaws. That doesn't mean it is without merit or cannot be entertaining. Sci-Fi and fantasy depend on a certain amount of suspension of disbelief in order to work in the first place. There's no such thing as magic or fire-breathing dragons or fiery space explosions or transforming alien robots but we just accept these things because it's part of the fun of the story.

    If we are going to judge sci-fi based on adherance to logic and lack of hack writing, let's just toss Star Wars into the dumpster right now.

    There are bad time travel stories - no doubt - but there isn't anything inherant about the notion of time travel that precludes a good story being written. There are tons of time travel books and movies I can think of off the top of my head which I enjoyed immensely. Did they have a few leaps of logic? Of course they did. Did they take historic liberties? Sure, sometimes. Did this make them bad stories? Not in the least.

    Also, if you are going to set Harlan Ellison as the standard by which our writing needs to live up to, then you, me and everyone else here should stop writing immediately. The very best of our work here pales in comparison to absent-minded napkin scribbling of any number of professional writers. That's why they are full-time authors and we are playing superhero games on the Interwebs.
  4. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Venture View Post
    Why is time travel a cop out?

    Because time travel is always a cop out. It never makes sense and causes more coherency issues than it solves.
    Time travel doesn't HAVE to be a cop out. Used cautiously and creatively it can be an excellent story-telling device. The problem is that it's so easy to use as a shortcut, that most can't resist. That's why crappy stories about someone going back to kill Hitler as a baby usually outnumber the good stories 20:1.
  5. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Aisynia View Post
    Since that's almost exactly what's going on? Yeah, you do.
    Obama Zombie! Bet you can't say it 10 times fast!
  6. I'll put a disclaimer in the description, but I'm still a little amazed that I would need to. I mean, the story depicts [SPOILER] a US politician using universal healthcare legislation to turn voters into zombies in an attempt to destroy democracy. Do I REALLY need to state that this is satire?
  7. I suppose I just view a lot of the criticisms I was satirizing in the mission as laughable at face value, and thus didn't need a disclaimer or explanation. I guess we up here in Canada forget sometimes that there are people down there who actually believe this stuff. We're quite fond of our socialism up here, by the way

    I think for my next mission I'll focus on something a little less divisive. Maybe same-sex marriage!

    KIDDING.
  8. Arc Name: Healthcare Nightmare!
    Arc I.D: 345379
    Morality: Heroic
    Level Range: 1-54
    Length/Number of Missions: Long, 4 missions
    Description: President Obanga and the Washington liberals are trying to pass their healthcare bill, but something just doesn't seem right. How can the government run healthcare? Who is going to pay for all this? As a true American, it's your duty to uncover what's REALLY going on!

    Thanks for the ingame feedback I've gotten already everyone. Clearly, my n00b is showing. I've fixed a few of the obvious stuff like reducing some of the map sizes and setting bosses to auto-spawn. I'll work on stuff like character bios as I go.

    One thing that surprised me were the number of people who suggested I avoid political humour or satire. Where is the fun in that?

    Anyhow - again, thanks all. Hopefully my next one will avoif some of these obvious pitfalls.
  9. This was my first stab at a Mission and I went a little nuts. Feedback would definately be appreciated!

    I decided to take a page from current US politics and do something based on the scaremongering claims of those against the Universal Healthcare bill. Tried to plant my tongue firmly in my cheek and have fun with it.

    Anyhow, like I say - any feedback welcome. Designing missions = tricky business!

    Thanks!