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I have relatives??
really nice story... I really look forward to reading the next part.
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interesting story, with much room for future issues....
i think u may want to consider adding the "Bolt" lost children into it, a father longing to find the kids he sensed he has but had never met.... enter Clarissa and Stray. talk amongst urselves for a possible future plot ? or if u find u dont like one another, thats fine too, as siblings rarely agree often. and are prone to disliking one another in some cases... especially one as abstract as this one. just ideas....
story has a solid base and lots of room for growth though IMHO.
