Pious

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  1. Pious

    Meow...

    Another excellent drawing m8.
  2. Wow. I liked that! I so really wish to know her now... challenge her. *wink* You know... reading it as the third-person worked really well. It effectively dramatised the darkness of the girl's person. Rather unfortunate though that this part confused me:

    That was when Shea became a problem - Charlie wouldn’t let them use guns on him so they cut him, she cut him up good, they didn’t stop cutting him till they had to use 16 different graves. He was a threat to Charlie – Charlie was our saviour – nobody was allowed to threaten him – ever! And she did like to use her knife.
  3. So many veteran mutants 'mutating' wings and more suddenly appearing onto the scene... some viral catalyst?
  4. That sounds pretty cool.
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    ((*snip* There was no posting order whatsoever, meaning the flow of time skewed and hard to follow.))

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    ((So what method of order would you suggest, if and when Necro starts this again?))
  6. Cools, thanks for your input guys. I've been playing on where to take Pious plot-wise, and was thinking of avoiding the cliche of angel-wings. Thats why I opened the thread. Anyone else going for angel wings? lol.

    Anyway. Pious is a mutant suffering.. severely.. from the development of his powers and I think I know how to explain fetheared wings now.

    He's currently in a coma and over the two years of dementia has has developed a split personality disorder; a self-proclaimed messaic angel named Nuntius Angelus who will soon either take over or unite with Pious.
  7. Pious

    The Demented

    A few opening words: During the creation of this piece of writing, the story of Pious became very real in my head and as a writer, I was emotionally moved. I wish to express my respect to those out there suffering from any of the disorders below. Mother Love's Memorial to Christopher Reeves quotes him: "A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to preserve and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles" and this has enlightened me, I have new found respect for the impaired.

    ***

    Mer'de the Journere was shape-shifted as Professor John Endoson, a bearded old Caucasian in his late seventies, large in build and broad-shouldered. His age was written in wrinkles across the face and creases through his long grey hair. He was dressed smartly in an all-white suit and sat in a coffee shop with a single table between him and a young mutant boy, about the age of sixteen. The kid had short black hair and was dressed in casual blue denim trousers and a plain white vest. He was skinny and short compared to the professor but most notable however, was his burnt-red skin. A pair of round sunglasses lay folded on the table by the young boy's hand. The two were solemn, deep in conversation.

    "So how old is he now Sinn?" Mer'de asked, in a low soft voice.

    "Pious is only two years older than me. He's eighteen. To be honest with you mister, it’s been a long time since I saw him. How old does he look now?" asked Sinn.

    "I'd say thirty. Thirty-four"

    "Ouch"

    A long silence followed. Mer'de couldn't help but feel sorry for the young boy. All he knew was that this was one of Pious' younger brothers, who had disowned him a few months back after his mental illness got out of hand.

    "How is he? Last I heard he was trying to be a hero" asked Sinn.

    "He's in good hands. Listen, Sinn, I need you to tell me everything you know about Nigus Falls State Asylum. What happened there, with Pious? How did it start?" Mer'de's tone was uncharacteristically soft and compassionate.

    The young boy took several deep breaths before beginning his account.

    "Pious' gift is relatively simple. He can manipulate and control the perception of reality, psychologically. Back in high-school, his mutation was pretty much dormant until he met Myrtyl Carpenter. They must have dated for about a year, they were happy. Always playing, laughing... but then Pious' problems started. We knew it was his mutations, but nothing could have prepared us for what came next.

    "At about the age of sixteen, two years ago, Pious' mental state began to collapse as his powers emerged. He lost his own sanity and was admitted into a heavily secured mental asylum in Massachusetts. He spent two whole years in the asylum, suffering from Alzheimer's disease. It's a neurodegenerative disease caused by his inability to cope with his rapid genetic mutations.

    "Over the following months, his conditions worsened. Dad gave up on hope and left us again. Mum..." The young boy suddenly stopped. He covered his eyes with his fingers, holding back the tears.

    "It’s okay" Mer'de whispered, encouraging the boy to speak on. "It's all in the past, Sinn. Come on, be strong"

    Sinn took a couple more breaths, finding the strength to carry on.

    "...Mum... Mum said Pious was cursed. She tried and tried to fix him, but her magic did nothing to help... then she prayed her last prayer, and offered her life for Pious' recovery." He could no longer hold back. Sinn cried, but the tears across his cheeks simply sizzled and evaporated.

    He forced a strange smile. "Surprisingly, it worked. Pious started to get better. Jason, Dante and I were so happy... but a month later, Pious had an accident. He had been having another one of his nightmares. Usually, he would be mumbling the word 'Angelus' 'Nuntius Angelus' but this time, he was screaming at the top of his voice. Never before had he behaved so violently. 'Fear him, we must fear him' he screamed, before falling out of his bed. The weirdest thing is... he broke both his legs and severely fractured his skull as if he had fallen thirty feet, but the bed was hardly off the ground.

    "Anyway, he developed craniocerebral trauma on top of his dementia. His bones healed soon enough, but the doctors said he would be paralysed forever. How wrong they were huh? Anyway, they stuck him in a stretch jacket and sat him in a wheelchair for over a year, under the same old routine of drugs and repeated examinations. July last year, Pious developed a severe 'accelerated ageing' disorder best described as the Werner syndrome. The doctors said his mutation had taken a turn for the worse. Jason and I couldn't put up with it anymore. We gave up on him and just left. Jason always agreed with mum, he said Pious' mutations would be the death of him and even suggested euthanasia before disappearing." Sinn sighed deeply. "I followed suit."

    "You left him to die?" Mer'de asked solemnly.

    "Mister, one minute my brother would just sit there, rocking like a retard, then the next minute he'd be completely motionless staring you straight in the eyes and for the next few weeks, you'll have nightmares. It was scary, borderline dangerous. Pious had to be secluded off after people he had made eye contact with began to spontaneously combust, choke, jump off rooftops; some were even killing each other."

    "Is that what happened Sinn?" Mer'de pressed. "Nigus Falls State Asylum, Massachusetts. Less than a month ago, every living soul, staff and patient alike were diagnosed with dementia. Was it Pious' doing?" Sinn remained silent. "Sinn... is your brother... a threat?" Mer'de had pushed it too far. Sinn calmly collected his sunglasses and rose to his feet.

    "Tell me where my brother is" he whispered. Mer'de thought for a second before speaking.

    "He fell... this morning. He's broken both legs and fractured his skull. You'll find him at a private hospital near Gimry Ridge... he's in a coma."

    ***

    A few closing words: An investigation shall follow on Pious' influence on the incidents at Nigus Falls State Asylum, Massachusetts. Before falling into the coma yesterday, he'd been seen in Paragon City acting as a member of the Militia and although he had recovered miraculously from the syndrome and his trauma prior to his release from the asylum, it is believed that he is still suffering from his delusions.
  8. Just putting a few questions out to other roleplayers to influence my own concepts for Pious. Obviously this might give spoilers to some of you lot's plots so I dont expect a great deal of response.

    How will you guys explain your character's wings (if they'll be getting some after i8). And why do they suddenly have these wings after all these years? (if they've been around without wings)
  9. Last night was great fun! I've linked the video I recorded into a short drama on our 'The Militia' thread.
  10. Pious

    The Militia

    The skies outside were still dark and gloomy. Some dark magic was blotting out the sun this Halloween, and it only depressed Pious even more. Slouched lifelessly in a rather oversized sofa at another of his million-dollar mansions, he flicked on the forty inch HD LCD television and watched the evening news in awe.

    [u]LIVE from Galaxy City![u] [Windows Media Player version]

    Newscast brought to you by John Golders of Paragon City Television. Subtitled by Jennifer Sutherland.

    [u]LIVE from Galaxy City![u] [YouTube version]

    Newscast brought to you by John Golders of Paragon City Television. Subtitled by Jennifer Sutherland.
  11. ((Must it be an alternate reality? Hmm.. I guess it kinda would if you're RP'ing the same chars from the High School. Why not ask Necro if this band can be after school or whatever))
  12. ((yahoo! I wont repeat my mistakes of rushing the status quo like I'm GM or somink. promise. ))
  13. ((Indeed Zortel. . I personally learnt a little later.. perhaps too late.. that it is actually supposed to go slow, what with the waiting for everyone to post some reaction before progressing the status quo. But I learnt and apologized.. and wish to continue.. or whatever. It was fun and I'd like to see it live on))
  14. ((i am indeed impatient. often forward and hasty, good side of that is i get things done.))

    ((but i am not disrespectful, i wont commence without Necro and don't intend to. ))
  15. ((well yeah. I've asked him in a PM, duh.))

    ((i'd really like to continue this. too busy to run one though))
  16. ((Paragon High is a school in Galaxy City for young heroes. It is still the first day of school and kids are just running around and stuff for now. I think its after-lunch at the moment, Acenra is exiled I think and Tyler is chasing him for some reason and Pious is in the virtual simulation training room with Myrtyl. Other kids are about doing thier businesses I guess. There's a list of teachers with a rough explanation of NPC's somewhere.))

    ((I think we should simply commence it here... no?))
  17. ((We'd have to start a whole different thread won't we? ... This one is near on fire ...))
  18. ((Dudes.. can we continue this thing? Please. It used to be well fun.))

    ((We're still on the first afternoon of High School darn it. Any other students about?))
  19. Welcome back Cognito, hope you enjoyed your holiday. Where is it you went?

    Checkout Miltia: The Episodes for a recap OOC. IC, Mer'de has been taking care of things in your absence.
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    Speaking of which... I have to do an update. ^^;

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    ROFLMFAOAPMFSLOLZOMFG!!!1! You have Angelus's nickers showing! Haha.ha.hahah.!!
  21. Whoo-hoo, sounds like a party! Guess we meeting in Atlas then.

    Oi. Somebody get a mission up and ready!

    ...
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    the great leaders of Dark Lords of the Underworld, Violators and E.V.I.L. have joined forces to lead and army into sirens call on the Sunday the 29th at 8pm

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    Shoguns of the Dark wont be there this time, but cower now for The Gang will be making a dramatic entrance.
  23. Part One.

    [u]The Necromancer: Militia Escort[u]

    Lemme know what you lot think so far and if you want your chars edited in or out. etc.

    I intend to eventually post these up on Creative Forums in November I think... when it'll be complete.
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    Kind of an Authority feel to the group I feel

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    Come to think of it, the public now knows a zillionaire funds us with Jets and the likes and we're supposedly pretty big around Founders Falls (i think). I'd like to think we'd command some respect from Media, what with the weekly major crime busts and especially after New Mafia's conspiracy.