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Hey, I'm writing a little fanfiction that sort of just came to me now, I think I can develop it into something. Well, here goes!
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The Pain of Team Legacy: Prologue
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Acessing Portal Corp. Main Computer...
Enter Passcode: *********
Passcode Accepted... Acessing Profiles...
Enter Universe ID Code: COH-743
Processing... Universe Found
Do you wish to view the current activity in Universe COH-743? Yes
Validating Access Level of Processee... Access Granted
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The Backstreet Brawler swung his mighty fist with all his might, knocking down the triple-reinforced steel door of Recluse's hideout.
"Everyone attack NOW!" Backstreet Brawler yelled to the huge group of Heroes behind him. Sister Psyche lead the group of approximately 400 Heroes into the base, hordes of Minions, Lieutenants, and Bosses meeting the Heroes head-on, the battle so intense that the base itself was destroyed as the Heroes slowly advanced into the base.
Lord Recluse looked on from his chamber, the body of the once great leaders of the Circle of Thorns and the 5th Column lying dead behind him.
"They took the bait." Lord Recluse chuckled to himself. "They rush in with such vengence in their eyes." He turned to the bodies of the leaders. "But I must thank the both of you, for giving me the tools necessary to secure my victory on this day." He looked over his new armor and his new sword that he held in his hand. His chuckle became outright maniacal laughter.
"Sister Psyche, come look at this!" A female Hero motioned for Sister Psyche, and as she came into the small room in the base that the female Hero was in, Sister Psyche gasped slightly as she saw the body of Dr. Vahzilok on the ground, dead.
"The body of the Clockwork King is in another room." Backalley Brawler decalred as he came in the room with the Sister Psyche. "Lord Recluse doesn't like competition, I guess. We have to stop that monster." He put his hand on Sister Psyche's shoulder. "We owe him that much, at the very least."
Sister Psyche looked at Back Alley Brawler, a tear forming in her eye. She then nodded. "Let's go."
After several hours of fighting through thousands of minions, and finding the bodies of the rest of the leaders of the Villain factions in Paragon City, the Team finally came onto Lord Recluses' chamber door.
"THIS IS IT!" Back Alley Brawler yelled as he punched the door down. Inside, Lord Recluse stood in his large chamber, smiling as Back Alley Brawler and Sister Psyche began to charge him with rage in their eyes.
"Upset, are we?" He mused, and with inhuman ease he punched Backstreet Brawler in the face, knocking him out, and fired an energy blast from his palm, sending Sister Psyche flying back into the rest of the Heroes that were now pouring into the room.
"Time to go!" Lord Recluse laughed, flying through the roof and out of his base. With a smile, he pulled out a remote-control type device and pressed the single button on it. The nuclear war head he had buried under this particular base exploded, along with the rest of the base.
Lord Recluse smiled as the blast enveloped the entire landscape, while he remained protected by the powerful armor he had gained from the 5th Column leader.
"What's this?" He asked, looking down as the dust finally cleared. In the rubble, Sister Psyche, the Back Alley Brawler, Positron, Synapse, Ms. Liberty remained unharmed, protected by Sister Psyche's shielding.
"Well, if I can't kill you the that way..." Lord Recluse drew his new sword. "I'll just have to kill you the old-fashioned way."
The five Heroes charged Lord Recluse, but with a swipe of the magical sword in Lord Recluse's hand, taken from the Circle of Thorns leader, Synapse was cut in two.
"Synapse!" Sister Psyche cried as Lord Recluse fired an energy beam from his palm to destroy the two halve of Synapse. Smiling, he charged Positron, who tried to nail Lord Recluse in the head. Lord Recluse dodged this, and impaled his sword into Positron. Positron, with his last strength, knocked the blade out of his body and Lord Recluse's hands, as the blade went careening into the horizon, Positron fell over, dead.
Ms. Libery used this oppurtunity to charge Lord Recluse, hitting him squarely in the head, knocking him back into Sister Psyche, who used her Force Bolt to knock him into the air, where Back Alley Brawler grabbed him and did a mid-air pile-drive with Lord-Recluses' upside-down body straight into the ground. Lord Recluse recovered, angry, and as Ms. Liberty began to charge, Sister Psyche noticed something.
"Ms. Liberty, watch out!" She yelled. But it was too late. The blade, which had the mystical power to return to the hands of evil, had flying back to Lord Recluse, and had found an obstacle in it's path: Ms. Liberty.
"NOOOO!" Back Alley cried as the blade went into Ms. Liberty's back and came out her chest, continuing to fly until it was back in Lord Recluse's grasp. Smiling, Lord Recluse swung at Back Alley Brawler's neck, attempting a decapitation. Luckily, Back Alley Brawler moved his head away just in time, but his right hand arm wasn't so quick.
"You MONSTER!" Sister Psyche yelled, charging Lord Recluse. Lord Recluse, with a deft swing, ended the psychic's life.
"It... won't end... with me..." Back Alley Brawler was struggling with conciousness as his wound bled. Lord Recluse looked down on him, savoring his victory.
"You know, that's exactly what he said before I killed him." Lord Recluse smiled, and swung for one last.
As Lord Recluse flew away, a young Female Hero, Chance, who had witnessed these events as she lay in her Personal Force Field, struggling to remain concious, now cried.
"Statesman..." She remembered the face of the fallen Hero just before she passed out.
Three Years later...
"We don't have the money to pay this month... please give us some more time!" The man said as he held his daughter close to him. His bathroom-sized apartment, now in shambles as the Revenue Collectors of Recluse had searched it for hidden stashes of currency, overlooked the dark, dirty streets of Recluse City and the equally dark sky above it.
"This is the second time you have failed to contribute to Recluse's Society." The Revenue Collector said, pulling out a pistol. "Under Article 1, Section 13 of the Recluse Revenue Agenda, I hereby sentence you to death."
Just before he pulled the trigger, the Revenue Collector's hand holding the gun was shot off by an energy blast.
"AAH!" The Collector screamed as a flash appeared to come next to him and pummel him, knocking him out. The man, bewildered, looked and saw what appeared to be...
"It can't be..." He said, looking at the group of 2 adolescent young men and 2 adolescent girls in brightly colored costumes. "I thought Recluse killed all of you Heroes..."
The man who had knocked out the officer (now out of Super Speed Mode) extended his hand to the man, a sad look on the Heroes face.
"Not ALL of us..." The Hero said.
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OK, so that was the Prologue to this story! Do you think this can go anywhere? Any Feedback is greatly appreciated! -
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At this time, I have had a heartattack. It pains me when people don't know what RP is but I get mad cause I am sure everyone knows what MMORPG is.
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Well, not everyone knows the term "MMORPG" -
I joined a TF today, unaware that the members of the TF were heavily into role playing. I'm fairly decent at Role Playing, and it didn't look as if another Task Force would be starting anytime soon, so I played along with them.
Unfortunately, this led to several problems, and to best illustrate this, I'll tell you how each other player designed their "Role Playing" in a manner that was... a bit extreme:
1) The Blaster of the group (Assault Rifle/Devices). Basically, this guy designed his character to be a bad-[censored]. Unfortunatley, he was SO good at this that he frequently cussed and insulted other players on the team for quite some time after even the smallest mistake.
"What the (censored) was that? (Defender Name), would it kill you to (censored) HEAL the rest of the group?! You lazy (censored)!
2) The Defender (Empathy/Psychic Blast). She apparently played the role of an "overly-permiscuous" woman... at least, I HOPE it was a "she"... it might have really been a "he"...
"Hey, stud muffin! You don't have to worry about getting hurt 'caus wherever you get hit I'll make sure to kiss it and make it better!"
3) The Scrapper (Dark/Dark). Basically a take on the "Goth" theme (which I guess is why he chose Dark/Dark).... It just got a little depressing...
"Why the hell do you care if you die, man? Life is pointless, saving people is pointless, this game is pointless, etc etc..."
4) And lastly, the Tanker (Invulnerability/Battle Ax). Basically, his character was... crazy.
"BRING THEM ON, MOTHER (censored)!!!! WHY THE (censored) ARE YOU (censored) STOPPING?!?! LET'S KILL THESE MOTHER (censored)!!!"
So, yeah, it was odd...
The point is, can Role Playing go too far? Or maybe it's good to enjoy such "colorful" company... -
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Swamp area's with tons of 5th, so that we need a bunch of heroes to help kill then. Let it be major fun like the Rikti. And please, keep the 5th comming. Dont give us twenty, and then nothing for 1/2 hour. I would ask during major play times 7pm to 9pm that you swamp the zones with 5th.
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I can picture it...
October 31, 7:58 PM
Mighty Man walks into Steel Canyon, and notices something strange...
Nobody's there. No Villains, no Heroes, not even any Paragon Citizens walking the streets!
It seems odd until...
October 31, 8:00 PM
"Mighty Man! So good to see you."
Requiem appears, walking down the street towards Mighty Man alone.
"This is it?! This is the 'Great 5th Column Invasion'? Ha ha ha!"
Mighty Man laughs like an idiot
"Oh, but I'm not alone..."
"...The 5th Column are never alone..."
"...because we ARE the Future!"
Two more Requiems appear, making a total of 3
"We're here to take back what you took from us..."
Requiem hits Mighty Man
"The Future"
Even with 3 Requiems, however, Mighty Man is having an easy time until...
A Paragon citizen, walking home from work, and sees the fight. She turns to run, but yet ANOTHER Requiem appears behind her!
"You!"
"Yes, me."
And with a spell, she is turned into yet ANOTHER Requiem
"Me, me, me."
"Me too."
The fight continues, but Mighty Man is still holding his own, and when he knocks one of the Requiems away...
"More..."
In an instant, THOUSANDS of Requiems appear, coming from around the corner, out of the nearby stores, and even jumping from the BUILDINGS to enter the fray!
All Mighty Man can say is:
"Oh, sh-t..."
(OK, so I ripped it off a movie. Sue me) -
Fact #1: They're getting more recruits. ALOT more recruits. "New bases cropping up overnight" sounds like MASS recruitment to me.
Fact #2: Their members afraid of someone or something in their own ranks. The fact that they were GRATEFUL to White Rabbit to be taken into custodity proves that HUGE changes are taking place in terms of power in the 5th Column.
Fact #3: The usual "sources" (most likely undercover officers and Heroes) hadn't reported back to Paragon Police at press time. So where are they? -
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The Fifth Column have found the Ark of the Covenant!
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Jeez, that's the LAST group you'd want to find in possesion of the Ark...
But still...
Without more information, it's like trying to put a jigsaw together when half of the pieces are missing... -
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The name The White Rabbit...
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Hmm...
"I'm late! I'm late! I'm late for an important date! No time to say hello, good-bye! I'm late I'm late I'm late!" -
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WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!
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Good question...
We... just... DON'T have enough information right now...
For now, this is all we have:
1) 5th Column activity is on the rise
2) Whatever it is, it's changing the entire STRUCTURE of the 5th Column hierarchy ("...as if they were GRATEFUL to me for BRINGING THEM IN...")
We just don't have enough info... -
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I have seen Wolfpack bots in lower level areas even today..
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Sidekick: What does it mean...?
Hero: I don't know... -
Maybe...
A New Nazi Leader? -
Anyone notice that the latest issue of the CoH Comic has a character that looks ALOT like Chaos?
Just thought I'd point that out... -
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Having a secret id is such a pain in the [censored]. My boss won't let me leave early to combat the encroaching hords!!! I try to explain but she just rolls her eyes. WHAT AM I TO DO!!!
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Do what Superman does:
Clark Kent: I have to go to the bathroom!
Clark Kent's Boss: Huh? Oh, OK...
Lois Lane: Ever notice that he always has to go to the bathroom when our office radio says there's some disaster in the city?
Jimmy: And the fact that he's gone for several hours, and that shortly after he leaves the radio says Superman has just shown up at the scene?
Superman's Boss: Maybe he's Superman?
(Lois and Jimmy groan)
Jimmy: Not this again!
Lois: Clark wears GLASSES. Superman DOESN'T. If Clark was Superman, how could he see? -
Don't worry;
The old Heroes defeated the Ritki Invasion, easily!
What's that? Almost every Hero was killed during the Ritki Invasion?
Hmmm...
WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! -
(Unknown Hero looks around office, notices everyone staring hypnotically at clock)
Unknown Hero: So, Ted, how are things with the wife?
(Ted doesn't answer, continues staring at clock)
Unknown Hero: Right, well I'll just go give these to the Boss then...
(Walks to Bosses office, Boss staring at clock)
Unknown Hero: Um... I have the report you wanted today...
Boss (at clock): [censored] IT! GO FASTER, [censored] YOU!!!!
(Unknown Hero silently creeps out door, runs into Company President)
CP: Unknown Hero, I want you in my office! NOW!
(Unknown Hero walks into CP's office)
CP: Now, would you mind telling me why you're the only one in this WHOLE COMPANY actually DOING SOMETHING?!?!
Unknown Hero: Well...
CP: Forget it! I should fire the whole lot of you, you worthless...
(Unknown Hero looks at CP's computer)
Unknown Hero: "Super Bunny Girl"? (Holds back laughter)
CP (stops yelling, walks non-chalantly to Unkown Hero): I'll give you a week's paid vacation if you don't mention this to anyone, EVER.
Unkown Hero: Done. -
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(In the White House)
(Secretary bolts in, alarming the President)
President (Working on Important Business, doesn't look up): What is it?
Secretary: Mr. President, we have an Emergency on our hands!!!!
President (Pauses and looks away from computer): Yes?
Secretary: This just came in! (Hands Document to President) Approximately 85% of all Office Workers have called in sick or have come down with a strange sickness at work today! Mr. President, we may have an epidemic on our hands!
President (looking serious): I'll inform the public immediately.
Secretary: Mr. President, what could be going on?
President (looks briefly at computer which has his CoH character, "President Man" safe in the hospital): Uh... I don't know...
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(Man at Home Talking to Boss over phone)
Man: I'm afraid I can't go to work today. It's my religious Holiday.
Boss: Huh? You're Jewish? Since when?
Man: I just converted today.
Happy Rosh Hashannah, everybody!
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(In the White House)
(Secretary bolts in, alarming the President)
President (Working on Important Business, doesn't look up): What is it?
Secretary: Mr. President, we have an Emergency on our hands!!!!
President (Pauses and looks away from computer): Yes?
Secretary: This just came in! (Hands Document to President) Approximately 85% of all Office Workers have called in sick or have come down with a strange sickness at work today! Mr. President, we may have an epidemic on our hands!
President (looking serious): I'll inform the public immediately.
Secretary: Mr. President, what could be going on?
President (looks briefly at computer which has his CoH character, "President Man" safe in the hospital): Uh... I don't know...
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(Two Superheroes overlooking Invasion)
Superhero #1: WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!!
Superhero #2: Would you shut up? These disgusting eyeballs don't stand a chance against the Super Powers of the "L33T Super Group"!
Superhero #1: That's the problem; the other Heroes in our group are stuck at work!
Superhero #2: WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!! -
(Unkown Hero Runs to the Exit Door of the Office)
(Boss Grabs Unkown Hero)
Boss: Where the hell are you going?
Unknown Hero: THERE'S A FREAKIN' INVASION IN THE CITY RIGHT NOW!!!! DIDN'T YOU HEAR?!?!
Boss: AAAAHHHH!!!! THE INVASION IS NOW?!?!?! THIS LOOKS LIKE A JOB FOR...
(Rips off business suit, has ridiculous Super Hero outfit underneath)
Boss: EXECUTIVE OFFICE MAN!
(Jumps out the nearest window)
Boss (while flying away): I'm coming, Paragon!
(Unknown Hero just stares)
Unknown Hero: O...K....
(90% of the rest of the office gets up and rips off business outfits, revealing color-coordinated SG Outfits)
Office Workers: White Collar Heroes, to the challenge!
(Run, Fly, and Jump away)
Unknown Hero (looking at last guy sitting in Office): Well? Don't you play CoH?
Last Guy: What do you think I've been doing for the last 2 months I've worked here?
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THANK YOU, DARKTALYN!!!
I appreciate you Feedback, and yes, I was trying to wrap up the chapter at that point to move the story along. Trust me, the fight scenes become MUCH more detailed and exciting in the coming Chapters! I will get the next Chapter up as soon as possible! Thanks for your Review! -
Doesn't anyone have ANYTHING to say?
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PLEASE POST FEEDBACK!
Someone must have SOMETHING to say about my story -
OK, Reviews and Feedback have been slow
For those of you who have been reading my story, if you have ANY Feedback, POSITIVE or NEGATIVE, PLEASE PLEASE POST IT!!!! (Seriously, I'm at the point where even a "This Story Sucks!!!!" Reply would be appreciated!)
Anyway, for those of you who read Chapters 1 and 2, here's CHAPTER 3!!!! From here on in, things get VERY Interesting, Trust me on this!
And now, without further ado, here it is:
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The Chaos Saga: The Monster from the Meteorite
"I can't believe we're over an hour late..." Supernovus said as he used his Group Fly ability to fly his Team over the waters of Paragon. He was heading to Peregrine Island, to assist in the siege of Portal Corp.
"Hey, it's not my fault!" Thunder Crush said as he shot a glance at Aurora Blast. "Someone should learn to get ready quicker!"
"Hello? I was woken up at 5 in the morning!" Aurora Blast said. "I looked in the mirror after I took my shower and could hardly recognize my self! There was no way I was going out looking like THAT!"
"It's a shame you couldn't pick up some of your sister's habits." Radiationshield shook her head. "You REALLY need to organize your priorities!"
"She got it from our mother." Sword Strike X said. "Our father was ALOT more strict with those things while I grew up in Kyoto."
"Stop reminiscing and focus." Shadowhand said sharply. "We have a VERY important mission coming up, and we should use this time to STRATEGIZE."
"Well, if Adam is correct, and the creature in this universe is as powerful as he says, we could be in for quite a battle..." Mystic Flare said.
"Hey, I see the Island ahead!" Solarblaze said.
"We'll be there soon, guys. Get ready!" Supernovus said as they approached the island.
The Portal opened up and dumped Dr. Lumina, Musashi, and Capt. Ein in the middle of Atlas Park. The Portal continued to stay open as they composed themselves and looked around.
"Is this the right universe?" Dr. Lumina asked Capt. Ein.
"I don't know. Ze contact ve had on ze inside vas only able to get ze Universe's coordinates, not a description." Capt. Ein said as he looked around the peaceful park. There wasn't a Skull or Hellion to be found.
"This doesn't seem the place that a 'Great Power' would be located. Your contact must have been mistaken." Musashi said to Capt. Ein.
"Ve don't know zat yet, Musashi. Let's see search ze city for any buildings or signs zat might suggest vere to begin our search." Capt. Ein said as he started off in one direction. He was suddenly hit by a Lightning Bolt, the blast damaging his arm.
"What was that?" Dr. Lumina asked as he looked around. He suddenly felt something very hot hit his head. Then his shoulders. Then his whole body. He was in the middle of a Rain of Fire! He tried to run, but then realized his legs were frozen in place by a Chillblain.
"I haven't seen the likes of you three for years." A Hero said as he Hovered above them. There were two other Heros Hovering behind him, both women. "But no matter. You won't be able to stand up against The Trinity!" He and the two women began to pose.
(Cue Background Theme Music)
"Tri Lightning!" The man said, lifting his left arm and making the "Victory" sign with his hand.
"Tri Fire!" One of the women said, blowing a kiss and winking at her opponents.
"Tri Ice!" The other women said, standing upright and pointing at her opponents.
"And together, we are: The Trinity!" The three said in unison as they held their poses.
(End Background Theme Music)
Of course, by this time Musashi had Group Teleported Dr. Lumina, Capt. Ein, and himself elsewhere. The Trinity fell down in surprise.
"Well, they couldn't have gotten far..." Tri Ice said as they composed themselves.
"I can't believe they left during our introduction!" Tri Fire pouted. "That's just rude..."
Suddenly, 8 Heroes seemed to fall from the sky onto the street.
"What the...?" Tri Lightning yelled in surprise as he looked up into the sky. Unfortunately, the Portal had closed by that time, so he didn't see anything. "Where did all of you come from?"
"That's not important." Backstreet Brawler said, still a little groggy as a result of their trip. "We need to..." He stopped short as he looked around, realizing his surroundings for the first time. "This is VERY different from the way Marcus described it..." He said, looking around.
"I see." Sister Psyche said, reading The Trinity's mind. "THIS Paragon City is perfectly safe right now. We must have traveled back far enough to before Chaos appeared."
"Who's Chaos?" Tri Lightning asked, still confused as ever.
"Where the hell did those three get to?" Mr. Demolition asked, looking around as he patted his gun.
"Oh, those three old Villains who were just here?" Tri Fire asked. "They just got away."
"You mean you couldn't stop them?" Kinship asked.
"No, they Teleported away..." Tri Ice said as she eyed the new Heroes. "They're probably somewhere around here..."
"Shouldn't Chaos have appeared by now in this universe?" Backstreet Brawler whispered to Sister Psyche so the Trinity didn't hear.
Sister Psyche was already paying attention to the sky, though. "I think he just did." She said, pointing to small dot in the sky that was increasing in size incredibly fast.
In three minutes, the astral object was large enough to easily idenify (Based on Statesman's Description) as the Meteor that held Chaos. The citizens of this Paragon soon took notice and The Trinity and Backstreet Brawler's group stopped chatting as they saw the object. The object also caught the eye of the only three Villains in THIS Paragon, who were hiding inside the entrance of the Sewers.
"What do you mean we can't go in?!" Mystic Flare yelled as the group stood in the Main Chamber at Portal Corp, talking to the Lead Scientist.
"Look, do you think it's easy to control the very fabric of Space-Time? Especially with a broken Control Panel? That Portal is unstable at BEST! I didn't even want to let the other group of Heroes in, but the Brawler wouldn't listen to me... I don't what will happen with this Portal! It's just too dangerous!" He folded his arms with finality.
"You're worried about what might happen if we get trapped in there, right?" Supernovus said as he read the scientist's mind. "Look, we are willing to take our chances, OK? We have to make sure that what's in that universe doesn't get in THIS universe, OK?"
The Lead Scientist sighed, shook his head, and uncrossed his arms. "Well, if you must go, go. I can't stop you. Just remember-"
"Try to get out as soon as possible, right?" Solarblaze smiled. She winked at her brother, Supernovus. "Don't worry, we'll be fine!" She called back as the 8 Heroes disappeared into the Portal.
In the alternate Paragon, the Meteor finally collided into Paragon, making a huge crater as it landed in Steel Canyon. Musashi quickly Teleported the trio of Villains straight to the Crash Site.
"Holy *&%$, it landed in Steel Canyon!" Mr. Demolition yelled as the group ran/flew through Atlas Park, dodging the panicking Paragon Citizens as they made their way to the Train Station.
"We have to hurry!" Molecula cried as they ran up to the Train Station... and into a Police Officer.
"I'm sorry, folks, but the Meteor's destroyed a section of the Train Tracks! We're closed!" The Police officer said, motioning for them to move on.
"Looks like we're footing it." Mirage Commander said as they ran/flew down the Tunnel leading to Steel Canyon.
"Some of us can fly." Tri Fire laughed.
"Would someone please explain what the hell's going on?" Tri Lightning asked.
"No time. We have to get to that Meteor NOW!" Sister Psyche said as she flew ahead of the others.
A group of reporters and some of the city's Hero's approached the meteor.
"Are we ready?" The Paragon Reporter asked the Cameraman as he straightened out his hair.
"We're live in 5, 4, 3, 2..." The Cameraman signaled the Reporter. The Reporter began his broadcast:
"Thanks, Tom, I'm standing next to the Meteor, which appears to have landed in the South West corner of Steel Canyon. Train Lines are down and Electricity in Steel Canyon is out. I'm going to try and get a closer look as this small band of Heores tries to assess just what this thing is..." The Reporter looked and saw that the Heroes were fighting some Villains. "A New Development! Right now, it appears that the Heroes are engaged in a battle with some Villains! You heard right, Tom, it appears that some Villains have in fact resurfaced and are currently fighting with the Heroes, I'm going to-"
Musashi Teleported next tot the Reporter and hit him on the back of the head, knocking him out. Musashi then grabbed the camera and smashed it on the ground. "Show's over." He said as the Cameraman ran away. He turned to his partners, who had finished disposing of the Heroes. "Let's do what we came here for." He said as he approached the Meteor. He was suddenly knocked back by an Energy Blast.
"Don't take another step towards that Meteorite!" Mystic Flare said as Supernovus' Team landed and surrounded the three Villains.
"Who the Hell are you guys?" Dr. Lumina hissed.
"That doesn't matter. What matters is that you aren't getting near that rock." Thunder Crush said.
Just then, Brawler's Team arrived on the scene, along with The Trinity.
"Hey, who are you guys?" Brawler asked.
Before Supernovus could answer, a large rumbling came from the Meteor. Supernovus, Brawler, and Sister Psyche were faster than everyone else.
"Get Back!" Brawler yelled as Supernovus and Sister Psyche protected everyone in Deflection Shields. Musashi Teleported the Villains to a reasonable distance from the Meteor.
The Meteor exploded open, a bright light encompassing the area as the shockwave knocked everyone back, despite Deflection Shields.
"No... we're too late..." Supernovus whispered as the smoke from the explosion cleared.
But it wasn't what Supernovus was expecting. The Creature was monstrously huge, had long, black arms and legs and a long, black tail, as well as tendrils protruding from it's head where hair should've been. But it's eyes. It's eyes were narrow and red, and it growled with an unearthly tone. What was this Creature?
"Well, it never hurts to try!" Brawler said as he lunged at the creature. He hit the creature with everything he had... and the Creature FLEW back into the wall of the Canyon, and hit it so hard that a landslide collapsed on him. The Creature roared and emerged from the rubble of the landslide, shaken but still ready to fight.
"We can take him." Mr. Demolition smiled as he fired his Buckshot. It hit the Creature, who reeled from it, but recovered quickly as he lunged at Mr. Demolition. Unfortunately for the Creature, Thunder Crush got between them.
"Go to Hell!" Thunder Crush yelled as he punched him with an Energy Punch. The Creature was knocked back. Tri Fire unleashed her Rain of Fire, and Tri Ice Chillblained the Creatured feet so he couldn't escape. The Creature was in pain, but not burned from the attack. All of a sudden, Musashi, Dr. Lumina, and Capt. Ein emerged and attacked.
Mushashi struck Tri Lightning, causing him to turn around and hit him with a Ball of Lightning. Dr. Lumina attacked Ryo Kempo, who sensed it coming, dodged, and counter-attacked with a Storm Kick. Capt. Ein fired his shotgun at Sister Psyche, who protected herself with a Personal Force Field and then hit him with a Mental Blast.
"This is TOO easy!" Mr. Demolition laughed as he fired his M30 grenade at the Creature.
He's right, this is too easy, Supernovus thought. Chaos was alot stronger in the man's memories. What's going on?
All of a sudden, the Creature Teleported right next to Dr. Lumina. He seized the Doctor in his right hand and the Doctor began to... DISAPPEAR into his body! The Creature's hand seemed to "ooze" over the Doctor, as if he was "absorbing" him!
"What the *$%& is that?" Mr. Demolition asked, shocked. Soon, Dr. Lumina was completely absorbed into the Creature.
"What the f-" In the blink of an eye, the Creature Teleported and grabbed Capt. Ein and Musashi. In a matter of seconds, they were gone, absorbed by the Creature.
"So... who's side is this guy on?" Kinship asked.
"Not ours!" Brawler yelled, punching the Creature again. The Creature flew back... and into the Exit Portal that had just appeared out of thin air. The Creature Disappeared into the Portal.
"GET HIM!!!" Brawler yelled, jumping into the Portal. The 20+ Heroes followed him. Soon, they were all back in Portal Corp.
"Oh my God!" Aurora Blast cried as they saw the Creature standing over the corpses of several Portal Corp. Scientists who were unfortunate enough to be standing by the Portal when the Creature came through. The Creature turned as he saw the Heroes.
"Say 'Hello' to my Little Friend!" Mr. Demolition said as he fired a Full Auto from his gun. The Creature's head was blown off. His body slumped to the floor, then disappeared.
"See? That wasn't so hard." Mr. Demolition said, laughing.
"Nice job, kid! Nice job!" Thunder Crush laughed along with him.
"Is it over?" Solarblaze whispered to her brother as the other Heroes were congratulating each other.
Supernovus narrowed his eyes. "I don't think so..." He said.
"What the Hell was all the-" The Lead Scientist stopped short as he saw the Heroes and bodies in the Main Chamber. He stared, raised his hand to say something, then lowered his hand. "I don't even want to know." He said as he stormed back to the Control Panel.
The Creature's body lay on the grass in a remote clearing in OUR Paragon. It had Teleported there by itself once it's head had been destroyed. The head of the creature regenerated in a matter of seconds. The Creature growled, looking around for the scent, the scent of Evil Energy. Soon, he detected what he was looking for. The Creature Teleported to a place known as "The Hive".
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Well, that's Chapter 3! It's not over by a long shot, folks! Again, ALL Feedback/Reviews are GREATLY Appreciated! Thanks!
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On the Next Chapter...
What is this Creature? Why is it differnt from what the man saw in his memories? Why isn't it as powerful? If it can absorb people, why didn't it absorb any Heroes? And will the Lead Scientist ever get the Control Panel fixed?
What's this? The Creature VS Hamidon? Why would the Creature do that? Many Questions will be Answered on the Next Chapter:
Chapter 4: The Source of Chaos's Power
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Some more Reviews would be nice...
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Thanks for the Feedback, Dr. Why!
(By the way, I only saw your post AFTER I finished the 2nd Chapter, so...Yeah, I would've reviewed it more if I saw your post first)
Well, you found one of my worst attributes when writing: Detail!
I'm still trying to perfect it, as you probably can see I put too much detail where it's not needed and too little detail where it IS needed... oh, well, this is what feedback is for! I'll definitely take your advice to heart when writing my next chapter
One thing, though: I know Statesman's not supposed to "Lose his Cool", but I mean, COME ON! His two closest friends and every other hero are DEAD! I'd be scared if Statesman DIDN'T get angry in that situation! So that's the way I wrote him
By the way, I AM going to go into how the monster (his name's "Chaos", by the way) is affected by MANY attacks in the CoH universe. Thanks again for the Review!