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If you have time to play mine I would appreciate it. It says Very Long in MA, but it really isn't. I'm not sure what designates how they choose the timeframe. But my first two missions are extremely quick. And the other two are more what I could medium then long.
Attack of the Tinkers Toys!
Arc ID: 5402
Faction: Custom Enemy
Creator Global Name: @Listens to Wind
Difficulty Level: Medium
Synopsis: A series of robberies has been taking place. Eye witnesses are claiming the perpetrators are toys.
Mission Count: 4
Estimated Time to Play: 30-60 Minutes
A couple people have played it and it has four stars. But, I'm really looking for acutal feedback on it. It's nice that people who've played it - like it. But that doesn't tell me a whole lot.
Thanks for playing!
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Mission 1: I love the custom critters. Very original.
Mission 2: Very short, but a cool boss and more unique toys. No clues and nothing about Tinker in the mission. Story needs to be tightened up around here.
Mission 3: Nice custom boss, but just more slaughtering of the same toys. Perhaps make this mission a little more unique. I'm not sure what to suggest, but it just needs something more.
Mission 4: I couldn't beat the EB because he would continually drain my End and the ambush by all the toys made it pretty tough solo. The helper didn't help too much. Being blinded every other mob got a bit annoying.
Overall: I'll give you 4 stars, but there is really a lot of untapped potential in your custom critters and story.
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Thanks Beach!
I'll work on your suggestions. I'm not sure how to improve that second and third mission, but I'll play around with it. The third mission especially. I know what I want, but I can't seem to figure out how to do it.
I've gotten some comments from folks about difficulty. So, I may make the EB a Boss at the end. I've toned it down some already, but maybe I should drop the ambushes at the end. Although I think those add to it. Especially the lines the characters say.
Some more comments I've gotten are people asking for the toys to say more. But, I havn't been able to figure out how to make the enemies say things. For example, the great lines that the Nemesis Automations have. Is that even possible? I could make patrols I guess, and have them say something. But I would rather have the lines occur as soon as the player is withing range.
Any more suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
