Jagori

PLEASE MAKE IT ON THE WEEKEND! >:O

On a serious note, Defenders Unlimited will be there.

Not bad. Where did he get the katana? I thought he knew martial arts.

I know you've got several replies for Spines, but try this one:

Think of it as cells stacking at an astounding rate from the skin, until they become the 'spines.' And yes, they seem to desintigrate, so maybe (for a origin concept) after a prolonged period the Spines become unstabled and the cells break down.

Third chapter was good. I'm not an excellent writer by any means but your fight when it first landed was kind of blurry to me. Other than that, it was good.

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I like how you managed to describe it so well with not much detail. Keep up the good work. =)

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Why were you the only hero to survive? =P

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"Let me provides you with the BEST security possible."

And let me provides with you with some grammar tips. =P

"...With his life shattered..."

Shattered might be a good name. Going with Vega is a good idea, too. In the end it's your opinion, not our's.

I remember reading this on the beta boards and I'm still waiting for an ending. =p Good work, Slipshod. Keep it up.

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