Help me flesh out this character concept please...


Cien_Fuegos

 

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So I got this inspiration from the Excalibur that you can build for Titan Weapons. (the new purple costume recipe) -- I also got inspired by the new Magistrate trial.

Yes I bought an Excalibur for about 1 billion influence for my level 1 TW/Fire Brute. However, it gave me an idea for a new concept along with the new Mag Trial. Side track for a second, re-leveling in Praetoria and I had forgotten how beautiful it is. I am not exactly sure what makes the zones there so awesome but they are the best in the game.

Anyways, I am still trying to flesh out my concept but I figured I would share it:

Basically my new character is a TW/Fire Magic Brute. The basic concept I have going (And still trying to fit all of this into the biography) is that he comes from another world (He appears human) where he was the Champion of his world's Well.

However, he finds the magical Excalibur sword (Debating if I will rename it) and it bolsters the character's power tenfold. The sword then speaks to him and leads him to a magical armor set (Still thinking of a name for this armor too) that also boosts the character's power. (The fiery aura powers)

The Well from his world begins to grow jealous and fearful of the character's growing power. By discovering these artifacts the character is able to draw extreme power not only from the Well but from himself. Ultimately, this meant the character could soon become an ascended. (If you have done the Incarnate story arcs and talked with Prometheus you will know what an ascended is)

So the Well creates a plot to get rid of the Champion by empowering a group of people as Incarnates (Here is where you see the Mag Trial Inspiration, or I was thinking perhaps gods the Well empowers) to assassinate the said character and sever his ties to the Well.

The group succeeds only the Well tells them not to kill the Champion because even in death he could become an ascended and that it wouldn't fully sever the ties with the Well. Thus, the group is ordered to bring the Champion to the Well and to dump the body into it in order to re-absorb the powers along with his magical artifacts (the sword and armor) in order to absorb those powers into the Well too.

****This is the part where I am still trying to flesh things out... The character ends up in a plane between worlds where ALL the Wells of the various races, planets, etc, have access to. The Wells all fight to try and absorb the character's artifacts and powers. The Well of Furies also tries but in doing so pulls the character through time and space landing him in Praetoria.

The character's story basically begins with his ties to the Well severed, his armor scattered (so he looks to be in rags) and only the Excalibur still in hand.

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So the last part is the part I am still trying to figure out is how I can land him somehow in Praetoria. I could easily write that he travels to Paragon as I could say his armor was scattered across the multiverse and that as he begins to reacquire it thats essentially his combat level rising up again.

Anyways any thoughts or possible help in the concept?


 

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rubber ducky your the one...


as Ood Sigma said....We will sing to you, Doctor. The universe will sing you to your sleep. This song is ending. But the story never ends.