Looking for some feedback and help.


NYCPulpWriter

 

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Ok, after a bumpy start to the MA system and many deletes and restarts I decided to actually sit down today and hammer out a proper arc with a story

Fast forward three cups of tea, one can of energy drink, no sleep and many cigarettes I am finally finished. (I may also have gone a little crazy but that's not game related )

The I.D. is 515562 and is called Twisted Trials
I wont go into too much detail here about it's actual story just incase some people prefer to find that information out for themselves while reading the arc text.

If anyone on these forums could be kind enough to run it and give me some feedback and/or perhaps catch out any spelling errors I may have missed.

Also, is there a channel in-game that people use to discuss story arcs where i'd also be able to post my arc I.D. for feedback? I did see a few people on Virtue putting their arc number in broadcast but if there is a proper place for it then i'd much rather do it that way.

Thankyou in advance, I shall now go in search of breakfast and more tea.


 

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Once the servers are back up I'll run a test!


 

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Originally Posted by Raeda View Post
use to discuss story arcs where i'd also be able to post my arc I.D. for feedback? I did see a few people on Virtue putting their arc number in broadcast but if there is a proper place for it then i'd much rather do it that way.
Many of us use the MA Arc Finder channel. It has it's peaks and valleys for active discussion but it's cross server so anyone can use it.


 

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Originally Posted by Zamuel View Post
Many of us use the MA Arc Finder channel. It has it's peaks and valleys for active discussion but it's cross server so anyone can use it.

Oh excellent, when I get back on later i'll have a look at joining it. Really would love some opinions on it that aren't my own, because i'm very biased