A good thing to do is run your arc through a grammar/spellchecker before you do anything. It's just way too hard for people to feedback grammar/spellchecking and much easier for you to just run it through a checker.
You don't want your feedback to be consumed by how to fix your grammar and spelling. You want feedback to make your story better.
Lots of free checkers online- I use this one here:
http://www.spellchecker.net/spellcheck/
When I feel like I've pretty much finished. I copy and paste all my mission text into Notepad by tabbing in between COH. Then I hit the checker and make the corrections in Notepad and paste the corrected text back into the missions.
Save coloring your text for last because it makes it much harder to run through a checker.
I'm working on 2 arcs hopefully before Christmas. Anyways I'm asking for as much critasiem as possible reagrding 1 AE Arc of mine called Galaxcy Wars. My Global Chathandle is @NeatherworldDrgoon
I am currently aware of several grammer issues espically the word Galaxcy. Correction being *Galaxy*
I am also aware of a minor confusion between the first 2 missions seeming to be mixed up but it's not.
Any other ideas or things I could do to make this arc better would be much apperciated. My grammer is terrable. So don't hesitate to inform me.
The arc is a 3parter atm and leaves you at a pretty big cliff-hanger. I am currently working to add more.
In the mean time If you want to try my other AE mission *NOT arc..yet* You can. it's Called Chirstmas Day and every chirstmas I'm gonna try to add one more to the storyline. So later this week be ready to expect another mission.
And I thank the 2 players who helped test the arc before mantinece. I appoligize for forgetting the correct names but if you read this I thank you again.
Merry Xmass All