ok, its been 2 weeks, and 40 views, but no (outside) plays (so obviously no feedback). I would really like some outside eyes to look at this.
If you haven't joined the MA Arc Finder channel you should consider it. It's a cross server channel where most of the MA authors and players hang. You can promote your arc there.
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Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Snakes in the Grass
Arc ID: 454126
Length: Very Long (4 missions)
Morality: Heroic
While working on a story in the Rogue Isles, Amanda Vines was handed some information concerning a plot by the Snakes. Fearing for her life, she has locked herself inside of her office. She is currently waiting for you to come for the information and to take her to safety.
This is my second published story, I still need to do some minor tweaking to the fist one though. this one I believe is ready for some test runs.