Working on a new AE arc and I wanted some critiques


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I've published a new AE story arc for general enjoyment, not a Pharm arc, but a story arc centered around Halloween and ghostly doings.

I'd love to get some play on it and some feedback from people, good or bad. Oh, and don't be shy about pointing out mispellings and such, I'm notoriously spelling challenged.

The Arc number is 453928 and is under @Greenlama. Thanks very much in advance for being willing to try this out.

It has the potential for big bosses and an archvillian at the end, so a party would be best, I really can't call the whole thing solo friendly. I tried to solo it a couple of times and ran into some problems with a Robot Mastermind of L25. Haven't tried it with any other characters yet, but I suspect it's going to be rough for some character types solo.

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Reposting this to the correct forum. Sorry for the inconvenience.


 

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First off, points for the self-promotion - without someone drawing attention to it, any given arc will sink among bajillion others and a constant stream of feedback from those intrigued enough to play it is key to improvement.

That said, you seem to be in the wrong forum - there's a specific one for Architect Entertainment, so you're likely to find a more receptive audience there. Also, you might want to form your own troubleshooting teams and see how things go firsthand. You say the arc is difficult to solo - that's also usually a minus, since there's still a large chunk of full and part-time soloers, so you're automatically alienating a part of your audience.