http://thelittleflowerchronicles.blogspot.com/
the pics are from a current graphic novel i'm working on its Military Sci fi.
I quite like the basics of the story. The dialogue could be a bit tighter and there are a few typos ("take's" when it should be "takes," etc.) but overall it's pretty good.
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Well its a 30 year work in process and Grammar has never been a strong point in my arsenal.
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Originally Posted by Ironik
I quite like the basics of the story. The dialogue could be a bit tighter and there are a few typos ("take's" when it should be "takes," etc.) but overall it's pretty good.
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a few more pics
any opinions ???