Bad Luck


Caemgen

 

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More like "Derviche Devil + Bad Luck = a bit of kinky" xD

Derviche devil (left) is my CO toon, Bad Luck (right) is my rad corruptor^^

(warning : a bit of nudity so deviantart filter)

But no, they are not doing anything NC-17, mind out of the gutter !

*facepalm*

Doh, I FORGOT to past the page ?!

http://s0ulasylum.deviantart.com/art...Skin-156500265


 

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Nothing at all ?^^; Really ?


 

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Err, the boards have been a bit slow lately?

Since you seem to be looking for feedback...

Overall I think the pic has a very interesting look that draws me in... I love some of the details in it but I do think the tattoos and shadows have too much the same look to them... In fact I'm not sure if the design going over their stomaches and up their chests is a shadow, a tattoo or some sort of costume piece...

Also, is the one on the left wearing sunglasses?

Anyway, I like the piece. It's interesting, has a cool style and there's a lot of detail to check out that isn't neccessarily spotted at first glance... But I think there could be more difference or something to make it clear what's shadow, what's body art and what's costume?


 

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SOUL!! It looks beautiful to me! The only thing I would suggest is to fade the background just a bit so that the girls really stand out! And I totally love the details of the tattoos!!! Beautifully done!


~*~VexXxa~*~
The City Scoop Art Correspondent/Writer "ART IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER"//"Don't hate because VexXxa is HOT and you're NOT." - JOHNNYKAT


 

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Quote:
Originally Posted by Caemgen View Post
Err, the boards have been a bit slow lately?

Since you seem to be looking for feedback...

Overall I think the pic has a very interesting look that draws me in... I love some of the details in it but I do think the tattoos and shadows have too much the same look to them... In fact I'm not sure if the design going over their stomaches and up their chests is a shadow, a tattoo or some sort of costume piece...

Also, is the one on the left wearing sunglasses?

Anyway, I like the piece. It's interesting, has a cool style and there's a lot of detail to check out that isn't neccessarily spotted at first glance... But I think there could be more difference or something to make it clear what's shadow, what's body art and what's costume?
For the tattoos, I tried different sort to give different feelings. For Derviche, most is tattoos^^ For Derviche I made a mix with the piece of clothe in CoX and tatoos and removed the thong to place a tattoo instead^^ You can tell... It's kinda tatts and clothes, so your impression is good^^

And no sunglasses^^ her eyes are entirely black, she has a sort of crown covering a bit of the nose and the brows.

Ah but... I'm not sure I want to make differences. Why ? Well, I chose the yellow skin for 2 reasons : 1 - because I don't like blue or red xD 2 - Because, like the "unusual" skin colors in both CO and CoX, those skins are perfect to use patterns in skintight clothes, giving a feeling of almost nudity (of course I'm not saying I'm doing "naked" toons, that's not my purpose).

Thanks for your feedback, Caemgen, I really appreciate it^^

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Originally Posted by VexXxa View Post
SOUL!! It looks beautiful to me! The only thing I would suggest is to fade the background just a bit so that the girls really stand out! And I totally love the details of the tattoos!!! Beautifully done!
Thanks VexXxa^^ It seems lot of people notice it too, I modified it, I hope it's better now^^


 

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Originally Posted by soulasylum View Post
Thanks VexXxa^^ It seems lot of people notice it too, I modified it, I hope it's better now^^
WOW, Soul!! The background was a good adjustment! The piece is fantabulous!!


~*~VexXxa~*~
The City Scoop Art Correspondent/Writer "ART IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER"//"Don't hate because VexXxa is HOT and you're NOT." - JOHNNYKAT


 

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Love that whole style, very beautiful.