hey, I know that nobody may look at this, but whatever, there's a chance someone might. this is an arc I've been working on for a while, and it's gone though three revisions at this point. I'd LOVE some feedback on it, in anything that people can find something to comment on.
Circuit Breaker
4 missions
AV, EB, B,
I.D. 360268
when an anonymous genius hacks past Longbows most sophisticated defenses, Agent Drive contacts you to help uncover a sinister plot that threatens to engulf the planet. Who is the elusive Fathom, and to what lengths will he go to reach his malevolent goals?
hey, I know that nobody may look at this, but whatever, there's a chance someone might. this is an arc I've been working on for a while, and it's gone though three revisions at this point. I'd LOVE some feedback on it, in anything that people can find something to comment on.
Circuit Breaker
4 missions
AV, EB, B,
I.D. 360268
when an anonymous genius hacks past Longbows most sophisticated defenses, Agent Drive contacts you to help uncover a sinister plot that threatens to engulf the planet. Who is the elusive Fathom, and to what lengths will he go to reach his malevolent goals?
so, there it is. have at it.