Heya Virtue. I created my first MA arc (Info can be found here) and I'm looking for feedback. Spelling, grammar, as well as just how it handles overall from a story POV.
And I know a few of you here are interested in story telling and role playing... I'm looking for any sort of feedback, good or bad.
Heya Virtue. I created my first MA arc (Info can be found here) and I'm looking for feedback. Spelling, grammar, as well as just how it handles overall from a story POV.
I'm looking for any sort of feedback, good or bad.
And I know a few of you here are interested in story telling and role playing...
It's designed for Dr. Aeon's contest, so hopefully it will be a little What The Hell, Hero feel to it.
Arc #345863 - When The Bough Breaks
"Curse you Perry the Plata...wait, is that Love Handel?" - Dr. Heinz Doofenshmirtz, Phineas and Ferb