Aside from some grammar issues, the only suggestion I'd have is that you change 'manipulates inertia' to 'manipulates density' since the two are very different concepts and you don't actually seem to be using the first one at all. Other than that, looks fine to me.
"If I had Force powers, vacuum or not my cape/clothes/hair would always be blowing in the Dramatic Wind." - Tenzhi
Characters
SENTINEL STAR
BASIC
Real Name: Justin Hopkins
Age:22
DOB: 11/08/1986
Affiliations: Reserver member of Freedom Phalanx, Full-Time member of (blank)
Equipment:
Utility Belt:contains inspirations and other needed supplies
Costume: Fireproof, water proof, nearly indestructable, keeps his body temprature
regulated at a comforrtable level.
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POWERS
Justins power is rather unique, He has the ability to manipulate the inertia of himself and
any matter he is in contact with*. This shows itself in many different abilities.
PHYSICAL ABILITIES
Invulnerability: By increasing his own mass to a very dense state he makes himself, effectively,
Invulnerable, he usually does this by only increasing the mass of certain part of his body at a
time.**
Super Strength: Justin ability allows him to change the center of the mass of an object and in efect
change the mass. This alows him to lift thing many times his own wieght with no ill effect to the
object or it's sorroundings
Flight:Justins flight his achieved by lowering his own mass and increasing the mass of the air
with which he is in contact. flight is then achieved by pushing ambient "heavy" air about him.
This ability does not restrict him to places withand atmosphere. Since space is not a perfect
vaccum, Justin can accelerate by "pushing" himself of dust and gas.
Super Speed: Justin high acceleration comes from lower his own mass to an arbitrarily small
amount.
ENHANCED SENSES
Super Hearing:Justins increased sensitivity is created increasing or decreasing the wieght of
various components of his hear without altering his hearing mechanism. His increased frequency
range is created by creating tempature or density gradients in the air, or withing the componenet
of his ear, shifting sounds into his audible range.
Super Sight:Justin is able to alter the absorb/emission spectrum of molecules or atoms, using this
ability Justin can then use shift the band of frequecy his eye are senitive to.
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HISTORY
Justin Hopkins was born in Paragon city in 1986 to Barbara and Gary Hopkins. His parents were
both normal humans. Justin was a very normal child, he went to school and played like an other
kids his age. He sat at the window everyday and watched the heroes fly by. His parents instilled
him with very strong morals.
Everything changed when Justin was sixteen, His father was picking him up from school, Justin was
Just learning to drive. His father let him drive on the way home. The drive was going Smoothly until
a patch of ice suddenly appeared in front of the car and Justin lost control. The car slammed into a
brick wall. All Justin remembers is waking up and knocking the door off it's hinges and pulling his
father to safety. The paramedics got on scene and took Justins dad to the hospital.
Justin sat on the curb for a moment before calling his mother. The shock started to wear off
while he was talking to his mom. about halfway through the conversation Justin realized he was
completely unhurt, not a scratch. He remembered knocking off the door.
Months past and Justins father was back on his feet. Justin had ben elated since he discovered his
unique abilities. Justins parents had been making plans for him to attend a local school for gifted kids.
The Paragon institute for Metahumans, called P.I.M for short, was sending out an evaluator speak
to Justin. The conversation didn't last long. The evaluator told Justins parents that he was more than
qualified to attend the school.
(OOC: skips ahead six year, school years will be handled in a seperate story)
Six years later and Justin is Just graduating from P.I.M. He was more than ready to being his career,
but first he had to have a costume made for the ceremony. While not required it was considered
tradition. Justin though long and hard about what he wanted his costume to be. After a couple weeks
he had designed a costume based on Statesman, his idol, The colour and symbol were the same
but justins was simpler. After graduation Justin was pulled aside by his combat instructor and told
that he had was very proud of him but that he needs to find a group to succeed in his career.
(Story picks up here with whatever group he joins)
* Idea for this was taken from Ben tippits "a Unified Theory of Supermans Powers"
**Invulnerability was not covered in the aboves report. I am making an assumption based on his research.
the only thing I was really thinking about changing was how his powers work, I like the "superman theory" but I was also thinking of going with something that allows him to survive in space and not require food/drink and live an extremely long time.
Volt Sentinel Reference
Thunder is good, thunder is impressive, but lightning does the work.