possible returning player


Fedor

 

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this is spazboys brother (you guys probabaly don't know him, but I figured I'd better make it clear I'm borrowing his forum name for a moment)

anyway. I'm currently on hiatus but considering coming back. The thing is I don't wanna come back without a solid character to play. I just watched skyhigh and batman/superman public enemies and decided to create a clasic superhero (superman is my favorite)

so I've come up with 2 costumes



this one is based on an old design of mine.


this is based on statesman costume and is more traditional (he will have a red cape)


the problem is I can't think of a name for the characters. and whichever one gets a name first is who I'll end up using if I resub. the second statesman-esque costume I'm looking for something vaguely patriotic, but not like American soldier, USAegis etc.


 

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I guess a bio would be nice

<blank> was raised in Atlas Park, Paragon City. He grew up watching the heroes fly by his windows. Everyday he wished he could have powers, but he was just a normal kid with normal parents. Life cointued on like that for him, he went to school and graduated a year early. For years hewas stuck in a dead end job in a nursing home. That all changed one day when he was taking a tour through Crey Labratories. He had stopped to admire some of the technology and was left behind by the tour group. Totaly lost he started to wander around.

after a few minutes he came upon a scientist his own age working with some chemicals. <Blank> watched for a few moments as the scientists masterfully mixxed and stirred and observed. He put his concotion into a large machine, it looked like it was made for a person to stand in.

Suddenly the words "overload" appeared in bright red flashing letters on the screen, The scientist was so wrapped up in his work that he didn't even notice. The machine started to make a loud noise. <Blank> ran in to save the scientist but was caught in the explosion.

As it turn out the concotion was a serum meant to turn normal humans into metahumans.
<Blank> absorbed the serum into his blood stream where it was instantly absorbed into every living cell in his body. His Cells are now desner giving him near invulnerability and greatly enhanced Strength. He is also able to fly by unknown means.



I'm still working it out a little but that's the gist of it


 

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no ideas huh?

hrmm :P


 

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Not bad, I think that would do just fine.


Heroes : Angrem (50 Stone tank), Exo Inferis (50 Fire blaster), Exo Proteus (50 ill/emp), IceVengance (50 cold defender)
Villains : AtomBomb (50 Rad/Kin corruptor), Aleks (50 SS/Inv brute), StoneLethal (50 EM/Stone brute), Davroz (50 Bots/Dark mastermind)

 

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you lost me before oyu even found me O.o


 

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Ahh I thought you wanted comments on the bio. Hmmm.... how about Commander Courage! Sounds like a golden age kind of name.


Heroes : Angrem (50 Stone tank), Exo Inferis (50 Fire blaster), Exo Proteus (50 ill/emp), IceVengance (50 cold defender)
Villains : AtomBomb (50 Rad/Kin corruptor), Aleks (50 SS/Inv brute), StoneLethal (50 EM/Stone brute), Davroz (50 Bots/Dark mastermind)

 

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oooh thanks
also that name is currently in use :P


 

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Boy Bravery? Stanley the Steadfast?


Heroes : Angrem (50 Stone tank), Exo Inferis (50 Fire blaster), Exo Proteus (50 ill/emp), IceVengance (50 cold defender)
Villains : AtomBomb (50 Rad/Kin corruptor), Aleks (50 SS/Inv brute), StoneLethal (50 EM/Stone brute), Davroz (50 Bots/Dark mastermind)

 

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I'd love captain something
or something man

I'm trying to avoid colours. and go for something semi patriotic but not like extremely (more like statesman rather than captain america)


 

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Captain Fidelis? Captain Virtue? Captain Honor?


Heroes : Angrem (50 Stone tank), Exo Inferis (50 Fire blaster), Exo Proteus (50 ill/emp), IceVengance (50 cold defender)
Villains : AtomBomb (50 Rad/Kin corruptor), Aleks (50 SS/Inv brute), StoneLethal (50 EM/Stone brute), Davroz (50 Bots/Dark mastermind)

 

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this is the costume I'm going with. I like the statesmanesque classic look.

basically the only part thats the same as statesman is the pattern and chest logo and I actually picked those out without even thinking about statesman...they just kind of evolved that way.


 

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Originally Posted by Fedor View Post
Captain Fidelis? Captain Virtue? Captain Honor?
good but still missing that click I'm loooking for :/


 

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I've been wracking my brain for hours...anyone T.T


 

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Really nice costume.

Good luck finding a Captain Courage or somesuch. I suspect all those names have long ago been pinched but there might be one or two out there.

Captain Omnipotent
Captain Fate
Captain Providence
Captain Miracle
Captain Destiny
Captain Aftershock
Captain Thundershock
Captain Seismic

Otherwise hit wikipedia or dictionary.com and start typing in words to see what comes up.


Let us stifle under mud at the pond's edge
and affirm that it is fitting
and delicious to lose everything. ~ Donald Hall

 

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First of all welcome back for the first time :P
As far as names incase you havn't done it already try the Virtue Name Watch thread alot of good names and people who are very creative in case you can't come up with anything.
Here is a few some ok,some really bad.
Star Spangle Warrior
Capt.Braveheart
Paragon Patriot
Diehard Patriot
Colonel/Capt. Playfair


 

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if you were a roleplayer. would you consider the name Cpn. Justice acceptable as a character name?


 

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Just, fyi, Captain abbreviated is Capt or CPT. It might be a little lesss awkward.

And, as far as I know, I don't think anyone has any real objections to correct abbreviations in names.

If Captain Justice is taken , you can always use Major, Colonel or General.


 

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I'm actual trying to avoid military titles but I'm getting desperate :P


 

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Originally Posted by Spazboy View Post
I'm actual trying to avoid military titles but I'm getting desperate :P
Maybe try adding American, US or Patriot before Justice


 

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Captain is a military title though. How about American Justice Man? Ohhh, American Vigilance!


Heroes : Angrem (50 Stone tank), Exo Inferis (50 Fire blaster), Exo Proteus (50 ill/emp), IceVengance (50 cold defender)
Villains : AtomBomb (50 Rad/Kin corruptor), Aleks (50 SS/Inv brute), StoneLethal (50 EM/Stone brute), Davroz (50 Bots/Dark mastermind)

 

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Omega Vigilance
Vigilance Prime


Let us stifle under mud at the pond's edge
and affirm that it is fitting
and delicious to lose everything. ~ Donald Hall

 

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America Prime? American Omega?


Heroes : Angrem (50 Stone tank), Exo Inferis (50 Fire blaster), Exo Proteus (50 ill/emp), IceVengance (50 cold defender)
Villains : AtomBomb (50 Rad/Kin corruptor), Aleks (50 SS/Inv brute), StoneLethal (50 EM/Stone brute), Davroz (50 Bots/Dark mastermind)

 

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Judge Justice.
Prime Justice
Mr. Integrity.
All American Man.
Mr.Relentless


 

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Justice Titan

Fist of War

Stellar Steel


Don't count your weasels before they pop dink!