Loving the style of the drawing and the storytelling. The writing reminded me of Heinleins early work.
I can offer no feedback on the art work having no ability or understanding of how pictures are draw it looked like something Id pay money for though. The writing needs to be altered slightly imo for repetition, but thats just a couple of minor tweaks.
page 2, the frame in the middle, does look slightly dodgy...
Very good, but my comments are perhaps overly pedantic:
Mig 15s look good but the F86 Sabres are in need of a bit of work.
My biggest gripe is '52 and the Korean War is one of the hottest parts of the "Cold War." Mcarthyism is rife throughout the USA, MacArthur did actually threaten to overrule President (Eisenhower I believe) and go Nuclear on China... and anti-communist sentiment is at it's zenith. Yet your protagonist is wearing red 
And has a big (non-white) star on his chest. 
Otherwise I'm loving the scene setting
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Yet your protagonist is wearing red And has a big (non-white) star on his chest.
Otherwise I'm loving the scene setting
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well yes. what i wanted was a blue top, with a white star, but i felt that combination, together with the word american in the name, may be pushing it a bit...
you're right about the jets. i have now had a look around for references on them, and can only class my work as shoddy.
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just a short comic showing the origin of a character.
there is a lot wrong with it. i did no research whatsoever, and thus have only a vague idea of what the planes of the period look like (hence the vague drawings of the planes...), i also got a bit fast & loose with my drawing, and feel i should re-draw chunks of it, but need to find the time.
comments / thoughts are welcome
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