Nice sketch for first time round, I like it! Although that costume is a bit...revealing 
Good work, I can't really think of anything bad of that, so great! Keep it uP!
A bit revealing? Lol. It's a all in one cossie! The uncolored area is white - can't see it due to the scanner. But thanks for the reply. I definitely will keep up with my drawing skills! 
really good when and if i get better at drawing manga i'll post a pic of my main toon on so i can see what enveryone thinks
I don't find it revealing at all. Very nicely drawn.
very nice clean lines and well proportioned
Thelonious Monk
nice one=)
Maybe the legs needs a bit more work, but is a good start=)
And nothing wrong with a revealing cozzie
nice work the eyes and hair are very well drawn, nice pose too!
I've been drawing for a few years but recently have not had the time until the other day.
I decided to have a go at drawing on my alts: Ivy League and decided to post on the boards for your critique, good and bad!
Let me know what you think.
Ivy League Drawing