Very Nice Marvellous 
Added you to my Deviant and added a comment
Catz
Doesn't see to work for me.. Just a little white box with an X...
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Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
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Doesn't see to work for me.. Just a little white box with an X...
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Yeah, I had a problem with it myself a few minutes ago.
Try this one:
BIG FLUFFY CLICKY TYPE THING!
Yea Deviant Art seems up the kazoo atmo, can't see some people piccies 
Nice, will comment on it on Devi 
It's not running away. It's advancing in reverse!
Thanks for the comments guys.
Does anyone have tips on how I could improve for the next one?
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Thanks for the comments guys.
Does anyone have tips on how I could improve for the next one?
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I hate creative commenting but here goes.
Ok firstly, the eyes im a little drawn into them. Perhaps try and make them a little equal, its not so easy to draw eyes in the first place so you'll get where im coming from.
And secondly, the head shape. Im not so fussed about it...
Do i sound evil? Oh my god i do don't i!?!
Bah..Goodluck with the next drawing
Catz
Hmm you could do some template lines first, like a sphere for the head and then lines to show where the eyes and other facial featurity will be (sorry been watching Sam and Max so I'm a bit weird) as it will help give the face a more natural look.
Probably some tutorials on that somehwere on teh net.
It's not running away. It's advancing in reverse!
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Do i sound evil? Oh my god i do don't i!?!
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Not at all, that's perfect, sort of confirms what I was thinking myself actually.
I had an incredible problem with the eyes and I think that's why I ended up drawing the face out of proportian.
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Hmm you could do some template lines first, like a sphere for the head and then lines to show where the eyes and other facial featurity will be
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Actually I did but I don't feel I have quite got the hang of it yet 
Thanks both for the feedback just what I'm looking for.
Yeah, I remember trying templating but even that didn't work. I simply suck. lol. A nice sketch there though Mister. Try some action poses next time, those are always exciting to see b'cos they tell a story, dont they?
I finally managed to get my sketch book out again last weekend. It took me a whole week to draw this (more through grabbing the odd 5 minutes here and there to do it than anything else) and I'm still not pleased with it but I am much happier than I have been with other stuff.
Jack Dakota & Mercury Star
All comments and tips appreciated.