Origin of Helvetic Knight (Comic)

Hey guys, after a lot of work I finally finished Helvetic Knights origin story. Took me a lot longer than that of my CoV-main, Killfrenzy.
Well, the file is pretty large (5 Mb, actually) and is a PDF. And since it´s hosted on badongo, you´ll have to wait 30 secs before you can open/download it.
Constructive critic is welcome.
Enjoy!
Helvetic Knight´s Origin

Reads well mate, I like the screenshots, very dramatic and the layout is nice and simple. The story is brief and builds interest into the character. I liked the last line, "Who watches the watchman". Dunno if it was your intention but it implied Helvetic might be more than a hero and watchman, but something maybe a little sinister?

Good read. Looking forward to more creative stuff from ya m8, so long as you spellcheck 'em. lol

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Odd that, because my IP begins with 81.157....

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YOU HAVE EXCEEDED YOU FREE USER DOWNLOAD QUOTA.
IN ORDER TO MAKE THE SYSTEM FAIR AND FAST FOR EVERYBODY,
NON-MEMBERS ARE ALLOWED TO DOWNLOAD A MAXIMUM OF 800MB EVERY HOUR AND
FREE MEMBERS ARE ALLOWED TO DOWNLOAD A MAXIMUM OF 1000MB EVERY HOUR

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Odd that, because my IP begins with 81.157....

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*Creepy Point* It knows who you are.....

On the plus side!, Awesome read. Really like it The screenshotting and narration is top notch! Look forward to seeing more from you in the future

Catz

Wee, thanks guys
Next story is already forming in my head... but not until X-mas as far as I can say. We´ll see...

Oh, and Sar... that´s the strangest thing I ever saw. Never had that

All of the comments above +1. I really enjoyed the narration ^^

But I have one remark...

Keep up the good work!

Thanks, Swissy. Really appreciate your comment
About your remark: (Took me some five minutes to get it...)

Aha.. don't mind me. I never make too much sense anyway