Hey all this is my extended version of my short story I currently have in my toons BIO I just hope that all of it can fit! any how this is my first real official orgin story I made for my main toon Firefighter Frank its not perfect I must admit but meh its better than "Frank got caught in a radioactive fire at a crey mutations lab the end"
Any how Enjoy!
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Ever since Frank was a little kid, his dream was always to become a fireman and not just any fireman he wanted to be the best of the best. But Frank never really made a commitment to his dream so by the time he was 19; he decided to just give up. Frank was an expert in computers been on them his entire life literally playing video games and such, so he started looking for work in an office environment.
He searched and searched until finally he got an encrypted e-mail from Crey offering him a job; it was a good offer too the Crey was willing to pay everything from travelling to his own home. After many discussions with his parents he finally took the job and headed to Paragon City, Frank was excited to be working with a top company such as Crey he met new colleagues and made new friends such as Mira, (Alt: Mira Mayhem) however Franks views soon changed after one night.
A few months later
Frank awoke from a nightmare on a Friday night at exactly 2:15 am a nightmare where all his new found friends turned on him; he looked to his new girlfriend Mira and sighed in relief as she slept peacefully beside him; he then turned to the window and noticed a thunderstorm has slowly formed. Frank got out of bed and as he was about to go to the bathroom he heard a knock on the door as Frank opened the door Mira slowly opened her eyes to see what was going on, a very large man was standing in the doorway wearing a formal suit and black sunglasses he also had no hair.
The man extended his arm and holds out what looked like a shock gun he fired the weapon rendering Frank unconscious and falling to the floor. As Frank awoke he found himself in a dark room tied to a steel mechanical armchair; he felt confused and disorientated from the shock, he heard some voices giving the commands to activate some kind of machine Frank started to panic as he tried to escape but was trapped. A machine came down from the ceiling as it pointed towards Frank it emitted a ray of radiation emission causing Frank to mutate, as the machine ascended back into the ceiling Frank was full of confusion, fear and mostly rage; Frank was so full of rage that he exploded in anger emitting an electro magnetic pulse breaking him free.
As Frank made his escape he found himself in a room full of Magic items he felt warmth in his heart as he turned towards a room he saw a red stone which was glowing brightly and then soon burst into flames Frank read the sign on the glass case it read Ember Stone, Frank broke the glass case and as he reached for the flaming stone it exploded violently as the fire quickly spread he immediately rushed to find Mira once he found her he blasted his way out of the burning building Mira hated Frank for what he had done as a result she run away from him never to be seen again
Friday 6:00am Frank stood upon the burnt down Crey building and made a promise to never loose any one in a fire ever again, hence that day he shall be known as:
Firefighter Frank!
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EDIT: Comments are welcome!
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Its rare to recieve comments here my friend as most people are too busy, but I thought the story was very interesting. You have very good imagination.
Hey all this is my extended version of my short story I currently have in my toons BIO I just hope that all of it can fit!
any how this is my first real official orgin story I made for my main toon Firefighter Frank its not perfect I must admit but meh its better than "Frank got caught in a radioactive fire at a crey mutations lab the end" 
Any how Enjoy!
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Ever since Frank was a little kid, his dream was always to become a fireman and not just any fireman he wanted to be the best of the best. But Frank never really made a commitment to his dream so by the time he was 19; he decided to just give up. Frank was an expert in computers been on them his entire life literally playing video games and such, so he started looking for work in an office environment.
He searched and searched until finally he got an encrypted e-mail from Crey offering him a job; it was a good offer too the Crey was willing to pay everything from travelling to his own home. After many discussions with his parents he finally took the job and headed to Paragon City, Frank was excited to be working with a top company such as Crey he met new colleagues and made new friends such as Mira, (Alt: Mira Mayhem) however Franks views soon changed after one night.
A few months later
Frank awoke from a nightmare on a Friday night at exactly 2:15 am a nightmare where all his new found friends turned on him; he looked to his new girlfriend Mira and sighed in relief as she slept peacefully beside him; he then turned to the window and noticed a thunderstorm has slowly formed. Frank got out of bed and as he was about to go to the bathroom he heard a knock on the door as Frank opened the door Mira slowly opened her eyes to see what was going on, a very large man was standing in the doorway wearing a formal suit and black sunglasses he also had no hair.
The man extended his arm and holds out what looked like a shock gun he fired the weapon rendering Frank unconscious and falling to the floor. As Frank awoke he found himself in a dark room tied to a steel mechanical armchair; he felt confused and disorientated from the shock, he heard some voices giving the commands to activate some kind of machine Frank started to panic as he tried to escape but was trapped. A machine came down from the ceiling as it pointed towards Frank it emitted a ray of radiation emission causing Frank to mutate, as the machine ascended back into the ceiling Frank was full of confusion, fear and mostly rage; Frank was so full of rage that he exploded in anger emitting an electro magnetic pulse breaking him free.
As Frank made his escape he found himself in a room full of Magic items he felt warmth in his heart as he turned towards a room he saw a red stone which was glowing brightly and then soon burst into flames Frank read the sign on the glass case it read Ember Stone, Frank broke the glass case and as he reached for the flaming stone it exploded violently as the fire quickly spread he immediately rushed to find Mira once he found her he blasted his way out of the burning building Mira hated Frank for what he had done as a result she run away from him never to be seen again
Friday 6:00am Frank stood upon the burnt down Crey building and made a promise to never loose any one in a fire ever again, hence that day he shall be known as:
Firefighter Frank!
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EDIT: Comments are welcome!