New and Updated Mission Arcs
BE Prologue: Gangs United, #250480, @Ozzie Arcane. Level 10-20. 4 small maps, Vahzilok, Trolls, Customs.
I was looking for a low-level arc, this seems ideal. My level 12 kinetic/dark defender, Vegemite Kid, found it challenging, but not overwhelming, fun battles. The contact is well written. Evil Corps is wonderfully cliche. For a new arc, this is solid stuff. I think there's just about enough explanation given for the disparate villain groups, perhaps something more could be said of the specific gains each group thinks they're getting from this arrangement. But it was what I was looking for to play. 5 stars!
I was surprised at the conversation skills of embalmed abominations. This might be explained by whatever magic has been applied to them, but I didn't confirm that.
The second mission has ice giants, but my goal is to take out the conventional trolls. Seems a bit inside out, perhaps a little more explanation. The map used for the second mission was unusual, but the objectives worked well there.
The goldbrickers and clockwork could have custom descriptions to go some way to explaining their presence here, if there's no boss members or patrols who could have dialog.
I was surprised the warehouse superadine wasn't destructible.
Corrupted description: Superdyne -> Superadine ; ehanced -> enhanced
Mission 2 intro: I'm -> I've
Mission 2 return: wierder -> weirder ; wieder -> weirder ; loverly -> lovely
Mission 3 intro: alittle -> a little ; em -> 'em
Mission 3 return: taks -> task
Succubus speech clue: abondone -> abandon
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Thanks for the review. The Frost Giants were supposed to be enhanced Trolls(I think I put that in their description). Since they had ice powers I was trying to give them another mythological name to go alongside Trolls.
And as for the Goldbrickers, there was a Boomer boss in that mission that made reference to having a device that could "Control those pests" meaning the Clockwork since he was surrounded by them. But that might have been easily missed in the chaos occuring in that mission. I noticed a lot of the objectives near the beginning of that map end up clumped together where you could lose track of what's being said.
As for the Abominations speaking. That's kind of a flaw of things like Patrols/Ambushes. You have no control over what unit will be in it and do the talking. Most times I've seen those groups talk it was a Mort or Reaper doing the talking.
All in all thanks for the feedback though and I will attempt to address some of those errors as soon as I have the chance.
Arc Name: Agent Thunder Task Force: The Cracked Mirror
Arc ID: 159922 Faction: Heroic Author: @Ozzie Arcane Level: 45+ Length: 5 Missions Enemy Groups: Freakshow, Wrongbow(Custom Longbow), Custom Standard enemies Synopsis: Villains from an alternate earth are attacking Paragon. Do you have what it takes to stop Wrongbow and the Domination Phalanx? Updates: Wrongbow has a decrease in custom mobs since I could alter regular Longbow now, however a few were kept for flavor. Also AVs now show up for the story faction they are in rather then Praetorians or Freedom Phalanx. Plus many of them have had color changes. |
@GlaziusF
Running this on a mid-40s ice/axe tanker, +0/x2 with bosses on.
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My contact is a government agent working for... the CIA? The FBSA? Hmm. Looks like some hero he used to work with has flipped.
Hmm. Were you using pacing? One day it suddenly started working and caught a lot of people off-guard. Theres a -2 door guard out here.
Oh hey, a guy from the Mirror Universe! Thats actually a thing that there makes sense to be now!
And he calls in ambushes of Wrongbow, the evil mirror-universe Longbow that beat up all the villains and took their stuff. Well, mostly the 5th judging by the costuming. Still, delightfully schlock.
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Okay, now theyre raiding Atlas Park. Dark Valk is basically Hrist, who summons spirits of dead Einherjar to back her up. Stock Battle Maiden and Spirit troops, could stand with some custom name and bio work like youve done for the patrolling Destroyers.
Diabolic Girl, who I take for Diabolique but who looks like another mirror-universe author creation like Showtime, is next up. Looks like stock super strength/invuln. No Rage, which is appreciated.
Ha! And of course Recluse is the brave freedom fighter holing up in the Rogue Isles. Just a word of warning, he still summons Bane Spiders with their usual descriptions. Maybe you could just replace him with a boss Crab Spider?
Lastly... oh, figured the leader of the masked troops was Mirror Manticore or something, but nope, another mirror author creation.
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And now Mirror Manticore has taken Liberty and Psyche captive, it would seem? Ms. Mirror Lib is out front with some renamed Carnies.
Little deeper in is Sis Psyche - apparently Mirror Manti liked his wife better before her accident so hes looking for either a body duplicate or brainjack fodder. Also: our Ms. Lib, and a flaming jock. Pretty nice fight with him - is that Build Up or Fiery Embrace going off? - but theres pretty much no reason for him to have Rise of the Phoenix since the objective completes when he goes down once.
...Mirror Sis Psyche is a brain in a jar, according to Mirror Manti. ...thats gonna be all kinds of wonderful. I can hardly wait. Mirror Mantis got Chimeras stock escorts around him, though.
Apparently he was just a pampered rich boy who got himself a bunch of bodyguards and GENUINE HANZO STEEL FOLDED TWENTY THOUSAND TIMES.
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Anyway, time to lock down the portal in. No apparent intel on what sorts are guarding it.
More villains in here! First up, a hyperactive version of Fusionette. ...which is kind of like having a wet version of water.
Next... yep, Clockwork Psyche and her army of mindjacked ladies.
Then, Mirror Faultline... who has a different display name than his detail says he has.
Lastly, Mirror Positron and his squad of stock Storm Elementals.
If it sounds like Im just listing off bossfights, its because this mission is just four boss fights, and the occasional patrol for color.
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Looks like States ran in to finish this personally, but he doesnt seem to have succeeded.
Ah. Hes right in the entrance, and being drained of his power by some dark ritual.
...at least, I assume thats why hes running out the door. He really doesnt say anything either way. Maybe theyre only serving breakfast at Up-N-Away for another five minutes.
Anyway, Im expecting a Tyrant recolor for the master here, but it seems more like this is the politician sort of Statesman. With a sweet cape. SS/Inv, which is alright but he could at least be energy melee. We already fought one SS/Inv in Diabolic Girl, and he doesnt have any real differences from that fight. Except maybe Footstomp?
Anyhow, arcs over. No souvenir, but its not like there were ever any clues either.
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Storyline - ***. For a long time, Praetoria was to me the mirror universe, where up was down, black was white, and we hated losing so they must have loved it. With Going Rogue, that all changed -- it became a more detailed alternate history with characters and interest groups with their own motivations, not limited to reflections of Paragon City. So its a little bit of nostalgia to go back to the schlocky old mirror universe and fight the nefarious forces of Wrongbow.
That said, the plot is paper-thin all the same. The only really glaring spot in it is the setup for mission 3, where my contact intuits based on reports of some dude who looks like Manticore that we should head for some old Longbow base to find some kidnapped people. I mean, just say Sister Psyche gets a mind-shout out before she gets psycho-dampened and go from there. Its also never really explained how Wrongbow can disable Sis Psyche, Ms. Lib, and Statesman, but all it needs is a little spackle - Sis Psyche is locked in a contest of wills with her mirror, and Mirror Statesman has worked out a ritual warding that jams Ms. Lib and Statesman from the powers of the Well.
Significant (to me) plot threads are raised and then forgotten - based on the first mission, it seems like the heroes my contact has worked with previously are being replaced by their mirror versions. Have they been kidnapped? Killed? We never find out. And Mirror Recluse shows up to help in the second mission but just seems to vanish with nary a trace nor mention after that.
Lastly, Mirror Psyche regards herself as a hideous abomination longing only for the sweet release of death, which is kind of off-tone from the general campy atmosphere. Okay, shes a brain in a jar, but shes got a collection of hundreds of bodies to mind-ride into. You want to camp that up, you could go with, say, she regards them in perhaps the same way as a fashionista regards outfits, and regrets not bringing anyone along who looks good in chiffon.
Design - ****. There isnt a lot of incidental detail in the missions, but the easily dozen enemy groups used are all used very well to realize the mirror world and the ways it operates and its movers and shakers surround themselves with minions. About the only power choice I really disagree with is the SS on the end boss, for reasons Ive detailed above.
Gameplay - *****. Pretty much an inventive mix of stock enemies, aside from a few custom bosses who generally dont have any really problematic power selections. Despite the warning in the description on CoH Mission Review theres really no reason to shy away from this arc if you have a character who can solo downgraded AVs.
Detail - **. Only about half of the stock groups are actually appropriately renamed and redescripted to suit their purpose. Thats not terribly jarring unless you pay close attention, but these days its not hard to have enough space to give every repurposed stock critter its own little name, title, and blurb.
More jarring: there are absolutely no clues, and not even a souvenir. Granted, the missions are pretty straightforward facebreaking exercises and the plot doesnt really need to be explained in a fundamental way, but clues are a great way to find the room to wrap up the more incidental details.
Overall - ***. On the high end of three, but it doesnt round up, mostly thanks to the inconsistent detailing on the repurposed stock characters and the lack of souvenir. Even if there arent clues, its always nice to get a souvy to remember the arc by. That said, this is more an arc about fighting a disparate group of enemies shot through with EBs and reveling in the schlock than it is about following a story, so while the storys got some room for improvement it doesnt really drag the whole thing down.
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[u]New[u]
Arc Name: BE Prologue: Gangs United
Arc ID: 250480
Author: @Ozzie Arcane
Morality: Heroic
Length: 4 Missions
Level Range: 10-20
Enemy Groups: Hellions, Trolls, Vahzilok, Custom
Description: An evil organization plots to bring several gangs together under their banner. Introduces a villain group I intend to use in future story arcs.
[u]Updated[u]
Arc Name: Web of Deception
Arc ID: 75310
Faction: Villainous
Author: @Ozzie Arcane
Level: 40+
Length: 5 Missions
Enemy Groups: CoT, PPD, Crey, Nemesis, Longbow, Custom
Synopsis: Aid President Evil in carrying out his latest scheme. To open a gateway to an alternate dimension.
Updates: I removed the 2nd mission, it wasn't important story wise really and I added a new final mission to help with the errand boy feel that everyone hates so much.
Arc Name: Agent Thunder Task Force: The Cracked Mirror
Arc ID: 159922
Faction: Heroic
Author: @Ozzie Arcane
Level: 45+
Length: 5 Missions
Enemy Groups: Freakshow, Wrongbow(Custom Longbow), Custom Standard enemies
Synopsis: Villains from an alternate earth are attacking Paragon. Do you have what it takes to stop Wrongbow and the Domination Phalanx?
Updates: Wrongbow has a decrease in custom mobs since I could alter regular Longbow now, however a few were kept for flavor. Also AVs now show up for the story faction they are in rather then Praetorians or Freedom Phalanx. Plus many of them have had color changes.