Alright Here we go:
Compass text:
Mission1
Protestors to talk "too".
Conversations need sprucing up. Try for different dialogue.
Clue - Misspelled Word "There".
Tidy up Success Return Text - Insert some commas.
Mission2
Tidy up Intro Text. Lots of spelling and punctuation errors.
Compass Text "Investigate"
Mission3
Intro Text- Spelling Errors
Stane "The Man" Lee ?
Storm trooper Dialogue: "We have Fallen"
Stan's Dialogue - "Exactly"
Success Pop up- "Shorter in real life then on T.V."
Mission 4
Intro Dialogue
I have a hero liscense. Why do I need to get authority?
Collection Objectives need text
Success Objective Spelling Errors
Here's my Overall Impressions:
Custom Characters were well done. You really made all the characters look like they were from Star Wars or were Superhero fans. I would have liked to see a bit more though. Maybe the Storm Troopers could have had some Empire guys or some different types thrown in.
Speaking of which although the enemies are minions, I feel they do too much damage. I was literally getting half to 3/4ths my life taken away with every group. That being said, with custom groups, it's hard to minimize damage. Custom enemies tend to have a large range of sight and do more damage then they should. So I don't really blame the players for their difficulty.
This arc needs some definite spelling and punctuation corrections. It's really bad as you can see from up above. I would have given it another star had it not been so bad.
Last, it might be nitpicking, but this arc could seriously get removed because of License issues. NcSoft Generics Hero Names and such, so you run the risk of the arc being pulled. Just letting you know. I didn't let that influence the score however.
Oh one more thing... Add a Darth Vader Boss to defeat in Mission 4. *wink *wink*
3/5.
Thanks I appreciate it, I guess spell check can't fix everything 
-Tigs
Yes you read it right; this is an epic battle for the Paragon City Convention Center. The hero worshiping Fan Boys are fighting to hold their convention with resistance from the minions of the evil Empire. As a hero you are contacted by Penny Preston to join the fight and save the convention. Are you up to the task?
Arc Name: Storm Troopers VS. Fan Boys
Arc ID: 215055
Faction: Heroic
Creator Global/Forum Name: @tigerztale
Difficulty Level: 1-54
Estimated Time to Play: Very Long (4 Missions)
Notes: Contains custom minions, no bosses, no EBs/AVs.