The Independents: 1 Mission Only Arc Reviews
By
Alari_Azure,
Posted on: 2009-06-01 11:44 in Mission Architect
This thread was purged, and is being recreated.
Here's the my review List before the purge:
<ul type="square">[*]ID: 34210 Blondes Revenge[*]ID: 44976 Computer Mayhem[*]ID: 1218 Dr. Duplicate's Dastardly Dare[*]ID: 29900 Trouble at ParaCon![*]ID: 6773 Over Nine Thousand![*]ID: 62635 The Cat-in-a-tree Catastrophe[*]ID: 1509: Mutants of Yarmouth[*]ID: 108318 Give Peas a Chance[*]ID: 113224 A Rose's Thorns[*]ID: 6529 Nanny Filter[*]ID: 40623 Goats in the machine.[/list]
Ouch, I would have guessed this forum would be a no-purge zone like Screenshots & Fan Art and Roleplaying
Arc Name: Slash DeMento and the Stolen Weapons
Slash DeMento and his gang, the Demon Spawn, have stolen some Weapons and a Bomb from the Paragon City Armory. Slash and most of his gang are former Outcasts that left after Slash gave Frostfire a nasty beating. You need to defeat him, destroy the Bomb and confiscate those stolen Weapons. They've moved in and plan on targeting something in Atlas Park.
Arc ID: 100045
Faction: Heroic
Creator Global/Forum Name: @Alari Azure
Difficulty Level: 1-54
Synopsis: Single mission that is a hint at my custom enemy group featured in the 4 part arc in the list. (Meet the Demon Spawn)
Large Map/Custom Enemy Group/Ambush/Boss/Collection/Destructable Object/Patrol. (No EB/AVs)
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--This one's had a major overhaul in the past couple of weeks. Much more content was added, the custom group has been tweaked to where now, it's a fairly well balanced group (at least I think it is). I'm pretty sure it's at the point where it's basically a 'finished' story. It's had less than 10 views, according to the MA (less than 10 ratings, anyway). It has maintained a 4* rating since it slipped down from it's initial 5* in the first week it was up. The comments that I have gotten have all been positive, with a few suggestions for improvement that I agreed were well worth doing. It's a story driven arc that I had a lot of fun creating. I also enjoy playing it. I really made it for other people to enjoy as much as I do. I would appreciate it if you would tell me what you think. 
No AV/EBs Deal with The Devil's Pawn-207266 Slash DeMento and the Stolen Weapons-100045 Meet the Demon Spawn-151099 Feedback
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I thought it was too, but they took a pretty hard chop to this section 
Hi MA Creators,
I seek the short films of the AE, the Indies. I would like to experience the final product of creators who have compressed their vision into a short single mission format. These independent mission arcs should have single well written short story, make good use of MA tools and have interesting characters.
I am hoping to review mission arcs that are only 1 mission in length and have less than 100 ratings.
I will review for content, creative use of NPCs (this goes beyond powersets combinations) as well as interesting use of MA tools.
I will also give feedback to the directors/writers/producers using the MA feedback system. A longer summary will be posted in this thread as well. Ill be running the missions primarily on my Illusion/Storm controller, but will change alts as the mission dictates. Typically Ill run on difficulty Level 3 and will turn down if necessary.
Please list your Arc ID# and any other information you deem necessary.
Thanks!
Also, if you have a longer arc, please post in my other review threads: The Sequels (2-3 missions) & The Epics (4-5 missions)