Made my first full story using ma and I'm looking for outside feedback on it to see where i need to improve and what is just fine.. Any and all feedback is welcome , and as i know this community is very helpful i figured i'd post it here.. Arc # is 172576 second half is in the first part description.. Thanks for the help in advance...
Made my first full story using ma and I'm looking for outside feedback on it to see where i need to improve and what is just fine.. Any and all feedback is welcome , and as i know this community is very helpful i figured i'd post it here.. Arc # is 172576 second half is in the first part description.. Thanks for the help in advance...