Kronis

didn't really work on the gramar cause i honestly am not that picky. Noticed the second part had a bunch of bugs with it since last patch so took it down to rewrite both from scratch. Honestly kinda disappointed in the lack of options for certain features in MA but hoping they add more in the next patch worth using..

As for your review like i said i accept all honest opinions so just wanted to say thanks for your time and when they come out with issue 15, I'll make a better one..
Maybe then i can write it in a better manner and you can try that one out..

Made my first full story using ma and I'm looking for outside feedback on it to see where i need to improve and what is just fine.. Any and all feedback is welcome , and as i know this community is very helpful i figured i'd post it here.. Arc # is 172576 second half is in the first part description.. Thanks for the help in advance...

Made my first full story using ma and I'm looking for outside feedback on it to see where i need to improve and what is just fine.. Any and all feedback is welcome , and as i know this community is very helpful i figured i'd post it here.. Arc # is 172576 second half is in the first part description.. Thanks for the help in advance...