I hope my arc is somewhat coherent


dugfromthearth

 

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it is published. It has 4 stars and 40 reviews - so I don't want to unpublish it.

But based on reviews, I went back and redid the overarching plot. I changed a villain in one mission (from Grave Danger to Grave Dancer, so it's just one character in the text).

I tested the changes on test, but I haven't had a chance to play through the whole thing and I'm just too tired (and I won't get a chance to play it tomorrow - early work, and then after work get together).

So it could be amazingly good - or it might just be a chaotic jumble. With how tired I am, it might seem amazingly good to me and still be a chaotic jumble.