Pro Payne: From 1 to 50 in M.A. (suggest arcs!)


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Originally Posted by Coulomb2 View Post
Teen Phalanx Forever
Why? Great ideas, wonderful and cute story. Most everyone here agrees this is a prime example of arc making at its best, and I agree.
Thanks for the kind words! Your first review was a huge influence on my reworking the first two missions of Teen Phalanx to be more interesting.

I'm also definitely planning on using your consolidated list of arcs reviewed by Pro Payne for ideas for arcs to play myself.

Best of luck on your next project!


@PW - Police Woman (50 AR/dev blaster on Liberty)
TALOS - PW war journal - alternate contact tree using MA story arcs
=VICE= "Give me Liberty, or give me debt!"

 

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The Galactic Protectorate
Why? Pretty much the same reasons as the previous, with the exception that I think this arc comes closest to writing a very complex ‘alternate world’ with detailed history that you have the option of uncovering as you play through the arcs of the series. I haven’t been shy about pointing out where I think the series has weaknesses (the chief one being that, especially in some of the ‘middle arcs’ the similarity in design gets repetitious), but it’s still a lot of fun.
Thanks for including my "Galactic Protectorate" series amongst your most memorable arcs, Coulomb2. Your reviews have helped me improve several of my arcs, and for that I thank you.

I'm looking forward to your upcoming projects, but for now enjoy your six-week "vacation". You've earned it!




Supplemental Galactic Protectorate Fanfic