Well done! Leaves open ended questions, but thats a good thing for future character development. Very Touching.
Anything in particular you thought might need a bit of work? I finished this at about 2am so I may have been a bit off when I posted. I know that I have to leave it open ended because she's still playing and all, but if there was anything in the story that needed more info, I can get that going too.
Oh, and does anyone know how to make the text wrap around those pictures?
Alright, so this is the work of several weeks. She is the first of the UHoA members to be finished, though I am working on all of them as well. I hope you enjoy the story and please let me know what you think.
Just so you know, I cried a bit writing this, it's kind of sad.
http://www.virtueverse.com/index.php/Sasha_Endal