Need story for Demo I'm creating

I want to create another CoH demo and need a storyline/storyboard. I'm not particularly good a creating stories so I thought I'd solicit for one. I'll be posting it to youtube and you'll be in the credits. It will take me a couple months to create the demo. If you're interested the story can't be too complex since I have to fit it into 4 or so minutes of demo. You have to image all the scenes being shot using in-game maps/powers/etc. A story taking place in outer-space or something like that for example wouldn't work. I'll be putting the demo to some dark Melodic Trance music -- no vocals. You can look up Melodic Trance on youtube to get a feel for what that sounds like. Since there are no vocals I'll include short text bubbles to move the story along. These videos by some dude named aralcox on youtube show the "feel" I'm shooting for, although my demo skills aren't as advanced as his.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4z5TH1WJu_c
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pvtsL...eature=related

What sort of storyline are you going for? Character-driven? Location-driven? Something based on in-game events (like my "Incarnate" video)?

I've got a lot of experience with that sort of thing, and am willing to help.

And yes, Aralcox does some absolutely amazing work.

Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite

I was thinking about a story for the new mission maker system. It could be a demo'd movie as well, now that I think about it.

The Origins of Portalcorp: Dr. Brian Webb opens his first portal to another dimension and releases hordes of unknown dangers. He either bulids some robot allies to help him close the portal or recruits the aide of old-style heroes to do it for him.

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What sort of storyline are you going for? Character-driven? Location-driven? Something based on in-game events (like my "Incarnate" video)?

I've got a lot of experience with that sort of thing, and am willing to help.

And yes, Aralcox does some absolutely amazing work.

Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite

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Hmm, I don't have any particular preference between character or location driven. Aralcox' seems to be strongly character driven and I gravitate toward his.

Where is your Incarnate video so I can take a look at it.

All my YouTube videos are at:

http://www.youtube.com/samuraiko

Recommended viewing:
"Incarnate"
"Midnight's Secrets"

Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite