Aggelakis Rough Sketch

Part of an art trade with Aggelakis, here is my rough sketch. Comments welcome.

Looking good. Only thing I'd do would be add a little more meat to her right forearm, it looks like it's bending a little further than possible as it is. Not terrible, but with the rest of the sketch looking so good, it stands out to me. Also, the left hand being totally hidden by the bow... I realize perspective is weird with things like that so maybe it was done purposefully, but I'd like to see some fingers coming around the bow considering the angle of it. Everything else looks great though, can't wait to see it finished.

That pose cries out for some "artistic license" on the size of the...um...chest slider.

WARNING: I bold names.

Thanks Unstable! I adjusted the arm. The bow and hand... I am still working on that. I think I have an idea of what to do though.

And Daemodand, maybe I will make a second version with the chest slider nudged... just a tad.

Thanks for the input guys.

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That pose cries out for some "artistic license" on the size of the...um...chest slider.

[/ QUOTE ]For the love of god, if this happens, change the costume and don't call it Aggelakis. Her chest slider is minimum for a reason.

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Originally Posted by Dispari I don't know why Dink thinks she's not as sexy as Jay was. In 5 posts she's already upstaged his entire career.

My first, cautious, impression is that the thing on the right side is detracting from the overall piece. I assume it's a cape at the mercy of an extreme wind, (this hypothesis would seem to be consistent with the depiction of the hair). But it's very difficult to understand what it is in just pencils form.

I might suggest just deleting that element entirely. Yes the lack of an obvious cape might be confusing considering the cape clasps on the collarbone, but I'd think the piece overall would benefit more from such a change.

Or if you can find a different depiction of the cape that makes it instantly recognizable yet not distracting from the main focus that's even better. Maybe something more like this windy superman cape.