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It's a good start....better than I could do.
One major thing that will help is getting a good book on drawing basic anatomy. I think that will help the most to get the character more proportioned.
Good job. 
One thing that would help - you are making the head a little narrow for the neck. Widen/enlarge it a little bit, should help the proportions.
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Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!